Reviews for When Harry met Susan

Progos 2008-08-22 ch 1,	abuseI am the Bunny Proginoskes. I like the idea, and your writing style reminds me of a little kid going "Mommy, Mommy! Guess what I saw!", which makes me smile. Dialogue characterisation is rather lacking, but I would have the same problem.
Terragon 2008-05-26 ch 1,	abuseSeems good. It seems like you don't have the characters down just yet, but that's okay, it's the first chapter. Same thing happened to me. Don't see this as an insult, but as constructive criticism. Keep up the good work.
NInjAlt 2008-05-18 ch 1,	abuseInteresting concept. I hope you continue. Too many stories have been dumped on this site here unfinished lately.