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| Mariel3 2008-05-06 ch 1,  | abuseI loved the beginning of this. You did beautiful work in that first paragraph setting the scene, letting us know where they were physically and emotionally. The rest of it was just plain hot, what more can I say! I'm so glad you're posting these here. Although the M rating may be cutting down your readership only heaven knows why you aren't being inundated with reviews. But please - keep on with these. They're great. |