Interesting start, but where's the rest of it? LOL. I agree with your assessment of Timm's JLU-verse in that it was unbalanced in its potrayal of characters and had everyone playing second fiddle to Batman, especially SM & WW. I'd love to see what you come up with, knowing that it's bound to be good.

Interesting beginning.
Want to see more of this one and awaiting the SM/WW parts.

hi Mate Can you Give Nightwing - Dick Grayson a bigger role in Your version of the DCAU Especially When the events of the story move to the Justice League Unlimited, episodes

and can You make him in a Relationship with Stargirl or Supergirl or Zatanna or Shayera Hol / Hawkgirl

Very nice beginning. Can't wait for the other chapters. BTW, welcome back!

Hey nice start. I am keen to see where you go with this. Ah Clark,always a bit of a masochist. Drooling after a woman who doesn't give him a thought until she has run out of options.

Update soon.

nice ending for this chapter, are you going to continue this story cause I really wanna see where it goes

david

I liked it. Great action sequences and I liked the way you described the horror scene- quite gripping. I take it you're going to put your own twist on it from here on, and I know it's going to be a good one.

PS: Is Dante from DMC going to appear in the next chapter? I thought I caught a mention. It makes enough sense, given that fiction's coming to life.

It'd be interesting to see how you explore the dynamic between Kal and Diana. I'm a little tired of the bm/ww stuff being shoved down our throats now. It begins to smother you for a while.

I've said it earlier and I'll say it again- please, please continue this! If you do, you've got a very happy fangirl ;-)

Aww, poor Diana. She's still coming to terms with how she feels about Superman. I found it refreshing. I loved it when Clark stayed behind to console those kids. No way you can see Bruce doing that!

I hope you haven't abandoned this, because this is looking pretty good so far. It's so hard to find a good sm/ww story, esp. a long one that's well written. This definitely has some potential. I'd very much like to see where you go with this :)

I love it update soon. I can't wait for the next chapter. Superman/Wonder Woman forever!

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way yo described how all the mythological characters came to life. Please update soon.

And another chapter is posted, this time from Diana's POV. It's nice to see her shrug off her ealier fangirlish-style crush on Batman (one of the most irritating subplots of the series) and begin to focus on her friendship with Superman, a place the animated series never took advantage of. One of the things that I always loved about her relationship with Clark is the special bond they shared. It was definitely deep, in spite of the fact that he is with Lois, and didn't need any labels to be considered romantic. However, in the animated DC universe, the writers cursed him with Lois as if she was the only acceptable choice for him in the multiverse (for the umpteenth time). I'm glad that's been avoided so far. BTW, you're welcome for the C2 addition. Update soon!

I love this story and it looks pretty good so far. It's very rare that you find good Superman/Wonder Woman fanfiction and I feel that there aren't enough out there. Batman and Lois Lane are not right for Wonder Woman and Superman and they deserve each other. I mean there is so much chemistry between the two of them in the cartoon and they just compliment each other so well. Please don't stop with this story because I really love Superman/Wonder Woman and this is one of the best stories for the couple I've read. Please update soon I can't wait for the next chapter!

I enjoyed reading your story. I liikede how you told what Wonder Woman thought of Superman. Please update soon.

Very good. Please update soon.

Interesting start. Not too many would use seeing Superman and Wonder Woman's relationship from Batman's point of view. I also agree that Bruce and Diana seem wrong as a couple (although try telling half of the JLA fandom that.) For Batman, the only woman that really meshed with him during his career was Selina. Also, you'll have to deal with the problem of Clark's so-called relationship with Lois later on also. Other than that, a very good start. Update soon!