I'm not sure I completely get the end of it or at least what Yusuke did. If you could please expain it. Othat than that i enjoyed reading it. It was very humorous especially imagining Kurama writing a story like that to begin with.

Hahahahaha!
Suckers!

GENIUS!

wow... ok,ok,ok im the exact opposite of speechless(in a good way)! that was so intense! lol, Yuske posted it on fanfiction before kurama could!lol! i would expect him to have it posted in the school paper or somin'! wait, if he did that then...OMI('I' for Inari)!

Oh My God!
*a few minutes later*
that was different.

omg! best story ever! i need to know where yusuke put the 'steamy text' hahaha i need to know!

Wow... O.O I said that before... and I just have to say it again... Your stories are AWSOME! This one was so funny and cute and... I loved it.

But Yusuke is sometimes really evil XD.

Another great story from you! YAY! ^^

I laughed when Hiei caught him.

But I don't understand what Yusuke did...

Oh well

Damn, it's been too long since I've checked some of my favorite profiles for new fics. This was too funny, I just love it.

That was hilarious! The smut scenes were really nice, but that ending was too funny for words!

That was amazing. It took me a while to realize what was happening at the end of the story but it was great!

I like it when fics make me think.

Even better... KURAMA WRITING FANFICTION OMG!

Oh this was too, too cute... and funny... and extremely original. I could just picture the perverted fox 'writing' that story!! ^_^

Okay... What just happend. Yes this was good and all, was great, helped my random smut urge (it was rare, when I want smut it's hard to find, when I don't it's everywhere, when I have a fluff build up I get a smut need, and oh, yeah, I NEEDED smut) this was really good... But what was the ending all about?



Yazumi & Skulls / Mika

this takes the cake for a great, smexy, yaoi fic with these two that includes a lemon (sort of -ish)ever! great idea! my computer has that too, but I never used it. lol. this is a great fic to read and enjoy! i think you outdid yourself with this one.

:-)

The story was good, but I don't understand the ending... what exactly happened?