really good

I.. I... I LUVED IT! OMG! AWESOME! I seriously really luv it! Though, it might have been rushed a little too me, but... damn, I was about to cry! TT

hehe... ako ng-type nyan... haha... oo nga ang haba... wel, i love d story... kng cno man mgsabi n hindi mganda ang story nito, sport!... hehehe... go niKai! gWa k p ng Mraming StoRies...

I am a witless bastard. If you think you act like an eight year old crying on momma's shoulders then DON'T read this review.

Okay, I warned you. For the second time, I am a witless bastard.

Today, I am really in the mood for reading so I decided to wander around for some fics.

Your summary DID catch me.

Unfortunately, your story didn't.

To be honest, I didn't really read it. I just read the first and the second scene and poof, I had all my hyper reading mood dissipate in thin air. I just read the last scene to find out the ending.

Apparently my senses told me that the story isn't going to be interesting as I read on. The ending, was, well, to be honest, a bit crappy, a bit corny, a bit weak and all.

Since I find this fic not-so-satisfying then I decided to leave a review.

I know I am a witless bastard who gives critisms like a savvy shopper in a cheap mall but I'm just worried. You see, sooner or later somebody else may not like your fic and happen to be more insensitive than I am,(I sure do hope I'm not the most insensitive reader in FoR, or in . Don't blame me for being stupidly frank, it's my brain, not me.) so better I say it more considerately than that person.

If I offended you, I apologize. I think I did warn you.

On the bright side, your ideas are good, so just try expressing them better.

Good luck.

Cute! I like this one!

aw... so warm and mushy.

i like the plot. it's good how their love could overcome something like death which was fated. also, you inserted a short epilogue and i like that! i've always loved reading happily ever after endings.. hehe.

good job, keep those fics coming!