I don't understand that last line...

BUT VICTORIA? YOU'RE OUT TO KILL HER!

Hehehe... nuh uh! You found the wolves! They can point you in the right direction, though!

This is good.

What a depressing story. I was waiting for Shirley to go up to Edward and slam that stake into his chest, only to realize it was like trying to stake a brick wall.

Well, I guess Shirley would have died quite soon... going after every tall, burly guy she meets. At least she died by something exciting, such as vampire, as opposed to something not-quite-so-exciting, such as angry professional wrestler.

Your writing, by the way, was really good. Not out of character or anything. I had been a little wary of the story, reading the summary and worrying about it being just another weird crossover fic, but I had been proved wrong. The only thing wrong about this story is the mental health of Shirley (Everyone knows it has to go in the heart!) and that was supposed to be skewed anyway.

Thanks for the great read!
-KayleeTam

What? THE END? NO!

Enthralling!

OMG, YOU ARE FRICKIN' HILARIOUS!

I LOVE your character. Her imagined Mary-Sueness, especially. This made me laugh SO hard.

Well, not really, because then I'd have freaked everyone out, but I stifled a giggle, anyway.

I can sense a confrontation up ahead... it's bound to be hilarious!