Aw...-smiles- I loved it! It was so sweet and gentle and tender...You captured Franziska perfectly. There's such an irritating lack of Franziska/Miles that whenever I come across such a wonderful gem it's a blessing. I loved it SO much. Again and again I loved it. PLEASE oh PLEASE write more!

Aw, how cute.

*SOB* That was really, really sweet, but for some reason it made me want to cry, great work!
-SS
Also...for some inexplicable reason it kinda reminded me of this Sarah Harmer song...

OH! That was SO SWEET!
You made me fall completely in love with this pairing again.
You captured both of their softer sides (which was so adorable!) and you still managed to keep the nuances of their characters.
Absolutely amazing job! ^^
I would also like to add, your best friend is so lucky to have brilliant writer as a friend :D

Oh my. This is very good. I totally like this pairing. My friend says that it's kinda incest but I don't agree. I like your writing style. It's so poetic and sinuous. You are a brilliant writer. Seriously.

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! yay! i loved your story so much, made me cry! please write more franziska/edgeworth pairings, i agree that there is not enough of them on ! thank you so much for writing this fanfic, please continue writing!

Aw! I loved that story!
Your friend is right, there's an irritating lack of good Miles/Franziska stories! Ivy deLeon and I have resorted to roleplay to make up for it (although it's not exactly lacking enjoyment of course! We love it!).

Anyway, this story was wonderful and you captured the characters just like I imagin them! Thanks so much for the fix, even if it was just for your friend, ya' made me happy to! Very well-written! Keep up the good work!

-Phoenix Tilea out...

This story is so good. You totally got into Franziska's head -- you do all of her thoughts perfectly. Actually, you know what, I just love your style in general. The last line was so effective, as well as the way you keep having lists show up, and the dialogue...

I'd really like to see a multi-chaptered story like this from you, if your muse will allow it? :D

I have to say; while it wasn't the bet fic out there, I enjoyed it enough. If I may make a suggestion, It might have been better if you did something like making it a bit less about what she thought, and more of what happened outside of her head. Also, this story went whipless. And while she surely changed, it doesn't seem right for her to be sans her whip.

=D sque!
How absalutely adorable!
I like your style!
Do wright more Edgeworth Franny!
(That was a pun not a typo ^^)