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| Kazaam 2008-05-31 ch 3, anon. | abuse**amused at Usagi being bored in school.** XD Oh wow, I didn't realize that Naru didn't know who Sailor Moon was. Actually, I'd thought she was a Sailor Soldier, too. XD; Aw, poor Minako. I hope she'll be alright! Yay for Jadeite being released from the crystal!^^ I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! |
| Crystal Rose of Pollux 2008-05-29 ch 3,  | abuseOh, I loved how Usagi had to admit that she was Sailor Moon! And the whole "bored in class" scene reminded me of Cardcaptor Sakura... And, oh, Jadeite! This is getting interesting! |
| Kazaam 2008-05-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseI'm definitely enjoying this story!^^ And I especially like all the detail and description that you put into the beginning, when describing that room. And using the music to help them remember is such an awesome idea.^^ Go Kunzite! He's pretty cool.^^ Haha, I'll bet Portman's gonna be ticked off that he disappeared. XD **snickers at the line about Zoisite and Kunzite being something else.** It's gonna be amusing when he remembers! XD Interesting dream! Though I feel sorry for Naru that it's not real. And you know, I keep trying to figure out if anything means anything, but I can't... Because I don't know anything! XD **headdesk.** Oh well, I'm really enjoying being introduced to the characters this way.^^ I like the way this one ended too. Yay for more foreshadowing! XD |
| Crystal Rose of Pollux 2008-05-06 ch 2, | abusePortman's at it again! Interesting twist with her reluctant assistant! Oh, and Naru's dream... so beautiful and sad! Great work! |
| Kazaam 2008-05-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know, it really is interesting reading this with absolutely no background. When I first heard the Generals had green blood, I was all like "Oh my gosh, it's Mako!" XD Man, Portman makes such a wonderful bad guy. I have to say, I was really fascinated to read about her and what she thought of everything! There are so many parallels with Hojo, but after reading this, I can really see where there are distinct differences, too. Aw, poor Paula. And whoever that guy with the boomerang was. XD **snickers at the last line.** Perfect ending! XD |