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The Dark Wrote
2009-11-29 . chapter 4
...okay, I love that. "You need to be Heero Yuy to get knocked up." XD Awesome fic!
BakaHito
2009-09-01 . chapter 4
o anything really, fun things and stuff that makes sense to you, its what makes a story sound good.
shogi
2008-08-03 . chapter 4
OMFG!! SEQUEL! NOWNOWNOW! AHahaha! That was AMAZING!! Hilarious!! Awesome! Whatever!! WHOOHOO! Oh god, I don't think I've EVER laughed that hard over a 1x5... well, it's a 5x1 is it not? LOL
Seriously, that was VERY good. Awesome work.
Next story? I would LOVE dealing with the birth and then bringing the baby home. I want to see Wufei's softness. I mean come on, I just KNOW he's going to melt like goo the instant that baby touches his arms. Don't you? And I REALLY want to have all the others guys come over! (They're uncles, aren't they? So they deserve to come over and see and babysit! Although... I can see Wufei as a protective daddy...)
Ah, in any case, I really don't have too much preference (that was just what I'd LIKE to see, not what I necessarily NEED to see) and I would just really enjoy reading a sequel to this.
Oh, btw, I'm not sure if I reviewed 'The Dance' but it was VERY well done! I really enjoyed it and I think I was so excited to see a sequel to it that I just jumped ahead. My apologies!
Mary
2008-07-23 . chapter 1
I've read this story at least three times, and i really really enjoyed it, you said at the end there would be a sequel...soo...PLEASE, write it i really want to know the other pilot's reaction's to Heero's pregnancy.
Fanruby
2008-05-17 . chapter 4
I loved this fic and "The Dance". Bad Wufei treating Heero so bad, I'm just glad everything got better. Thought I can't wait to see the other G boys reaction. How's the baby going to look like? Keep on the great writting.
prima
2008-05-13 . chapter 3
this is good. I like it...please continue
Alzilur
2008-05-13 . chapter 3
I really love their interaction in this chapter...and Wufei kept briging up Sharine...gr!
i'malive
2008-05-08 . chapter 2
Wufei is my favorite too. I'm glad you're writting him like this, I hate it when everyone expects it to be all sunshine and rainbows in a mpreg. In the last fic Wufei didn't seem all that ready to have kids in the first place, and add to that his boyfriend, first male lover and all,us carrying the baby,I'd be a little freaked too. Also love it how it's written from Heero's pov this time around.
Tsuchi
2008-05-08 . chapter 2
okay, so I'm a little squicked by the whole 'Heero is pregnant' thing, but as I'm reading this because I liked 'The Dance', I figure I'll stick around until there's a glaring reason not to. You've done a pretty good (read: amazing) job of keeping the characters *in* character (read: managing to use story lines that have been used before without a) compromising the originality of it, b) figuratively turning one or more of the characters into children/girls, c) ignored major issues and/or d) written yourself into a corner) so you've racked up some pretty nice points right there.
So pretty much... yeah, I'm hoping for an update soon. Even though I don't like Mpreg fics. Go you!
Alzilur
2008-05-08 . chapter 2
Yes...kill Sharine and stuff him somewhere Heero.

Poor Heero but Wufei will make up for everything...will he?

A great chapter and an interesting story, keep up the good work.

Love this

A
kris
2008-05-07 . chapter 1
Aw, poor Heero in this fic. He is so sad, and confussed. I really love this the way this fic is starting, and think it has a great plot, and the characters are great. There's already a huge ammount of emotion and tension between Heero and Wufei, and i can't wait to read more. please update.
ab
2008-05-07 . chapter 1
continue. (: please.
dimonyo-anghel
2008-05-06 . chapter 1
Poor Heero!! Stupid Wufei! He better have a good reason as to why he's being a butt to Heero!! I hope the baby's a boy! ^-^
getaiyou
2008-05-06 . chapter 1
This is one that I definitely has got to know how things turns out. What he has done to Heero is cruel for it is something that Heero has not yet face and this is just like killing the babe. He better have a great, fantastic, absolutely magnificent explanation.
alzilur
2008-05-06 . chapter 1
O...I like it...more 1x5 and it was always Wufei that got preggie whenever he was paired with Heero. This is interesting so I'll be waiting for more updates.
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