I read all 6 chapters in one go, it was great. Chapter 5 was sad, but I felt a little lost, how & when did they hook up??

Muh. Doumeki is a boring drunk. Should have guessed. Or maybe he was an affectionate one? Hard to tell, with him. :P

That was cute, though you could have exploited Doumeki's drunkenness a bit more... considering how fussy Watanuki is, I would have thought that he would have complained a bit more about Doumeki's breath, and his stinking of alcohol and smoke (bars are infamous for being smoking dens, particularly in Japan).

Haha. Doumeki is deadpan even when drunk, isn't he? He would be. Great characterization. Have some cookies.

aw...that was so sweet..i love it! doumeki drunk! this is the first time ive read something like this..i hope you write a morning after version..please??!!

xDD that was awesome! update soon! please adn thanx! ^.^

Aww, there are depressed drunks and angry drunks, but Doumeki is a...Doumeki drunk. Great job. :)

Ha, he didn't sound drunk at all...But this was cute.

so nice~ love this...cute...aww..

that was really something! i love it..huhuhu..what if watanuki forgets..im reading the manga and im dying of anticipation..hmm

These are good.

aw, it's so sad! and the pride drabble gave me chills.
great so far!! write more soon!

thanks
audrey

OMG!! so sad! >< but it was awesome! xD update soon! i love it! ^.^

A very sad, yet sweet piece.
I like the way you address Watanuki's ocasional lack of memories, and his pain at not remembering the exact moment he fell in love with Doumeki... and his fear of ever forgetting that he loves him at all. Of course, Doumeki's answer to that fear was wonderful, and very Doumeki. :)

Oh, this definitely fits the Holic world to a tee! I really enjoy how you wrote Watanuki finally understanding his feelings, as well as the entire chapter itself. I wonder about the extra period/full stop at the end of "Realized it!", though. The dialogue itself was quite in character, and I like how Yuuko just goes about business as usual at the end. Nicely done, all in all!
Take care,
~September's Nobara.

I like this set of one shots. I would love to see more. Update soon. Thanks.