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| Elfinabottle 2008-07-06 ch 5,  | abuseNice chapter. I loved Gandald comparing Aragorn to a hobbit with all his questions, then in typical Gandalf fashion, not answering any of them. He must be one frustrating wizard to be around! Can we have some more Elladan/Elrohir teaming up on Aragorn, please? They deserve to after all the worry he's put them through. |
| acacia59601 2008-07-06 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter! I love how you portray Frodo's dreams getting more normal as he recovers. |
| Lady Ambreanna 2008-07-06 ch 5, | abuseThank you for the chapter! |
| Firefly-Maj 2008-07-06 ch 5, | abuseYou are such a good writer, I have had the shivers down my spine when reading Elrohirs thoughts. It is a gift to be able to conjure an atmosphere like this in a story, and you absolutely have it! It´s been worth waiting, and it was a pleasant surprise to be alarmed that this new chapter was up... all the best to you and I´m looking forward for more (but I don´t mean to put the screws on you =) )! |
| teenelizabeth 2008-07-06 ch 5, | abuseI could go for a massage from Elrohir about now. =D The hobbits' interactions with the elf were very amusing. Well done! -Christine |
| rabidsamfan 2008-07-06 ch 5, | abuseHave I ever mentioned that I love your way with dialogue? It makes me feel like I've opened up one of JRRTs' unfinished tales. |
| Apsenniel 2008-07-06 ch 5, | abuseShirebound - you never fail to get me all emotional at the end of these chapters. The conversation between Elrohir and the hobbits, and the hobbits' reassurances to Elrohir at the end, are quite touching...lovely. |
| sodasgirl9898 2008-07-02 ch 4, | abuseI LOVED IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING |
| lovethosehobbits 2008-06-28 ch 4, anon. | abuseWell, it's about time, isn't it? I finally am getting caught up on what I really love. This is so wonderful...just the perfect type of story that I enjoy...hurt...comfort, and more comfort. I bet Lily's in hog heaven, since this is one of the things she most desires. |
| acacia59601 2008-06-22 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter, I love how you incorporated Frodo's brush with death in as well. |
| szepilona10 2008-06-22 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter! Update soon please! God Bless! ~Szepilona10~ |
| Apsenniel 2008-06-21 ch 4, | abuse"Frodo touched Aragorn’s face and was relieved that it felt neither chilled nor fevered. Aragorn didn’t stir, but Frodo felt that he might know, somehow, that a friend was near. Setting aside troubling thoughts for a time, he took one of the large hands in his own and finally drifted towards sleep." This last paragraph brought tears to my eyes... |
| Red Minerva 2008-06-21 ch 4, | abuseI fear I am repeating myself, but I DO love your stories, and espcially your Aragorn h/c fics. Clearly, though the man is a gifted healer himself, he has no sense of taking proper care of himself, and so it falls to those who love him to look after him. I am particularly fond of the love Frodo has for him, and just had to smile gently when he crawled into bed next to Aragorn so he might sense that he wasn't alone. What a lovely moment! Thank you for sharing this story. |
| Anargil 2008-06-20 ch 4, | abusePoor Aragorn! It's true, he really hasn't had rest since Lorien. No wonder he made himself sick. Exhaustion sickness is no fun. Looking forward to more! - Anargil |
| Elfinabottle 2008-06-19 ch 4, | abuseWhat a great chapter! I can absolutely see something like this happening to Aragorn after he had pushed himself so hard for so long. And I loved Frodo's concern, and the way he wanted to keep close by lying next to Aragorn so he wouldn't feel alone. Beautiful. |