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| silme33 2008-08-25 ch 8, | abuseI have just found these stories, and I think they are great. Well done. I had a bit of a chuckle at the place called "Wet Wang", there is a Wetwang near to where I live in the U.K. Silme |
| Amadoni 2008-06-22 ch 8, | abuseI know you've heard this several times before. But if there is a way, please, please, please make another chapter/story/ or make a trilogy with this pairing. |
| RK9 2008-05-25 ch 8, | abuseOh my goody-goody gosh! That was just the beautifulest Legolas/OC I've read in a long time! Very well done indeed, and I love that your writing style mirrors the style of the books. But say, would it be too much to ask for Elireth and Legolas to end up together, like Aragorn and Arwen? You must write another sequel to this one, please! RK9. |
| Lady of the Rebel Angels 2008-05-16 ch 8, | abuseUm... not really being an Arwen fan, i didn't find this ending as satisfying as the ending to the handmaid of gondor. you are getting better at writing with every chapter, and i look forward to future stories. |
| vectis 2008-05-16 ch 8, | abuseI thought that was quite a fitting end to the story and I'm glad you managed to stick with the theme of unrequited love. |
| Ilada'Jefiv 2008-05-16 ch 8, | abuseAw! Wonderful ending! I like how this has turned out regardless of the last chapter. You should try you hand at some more LotRs! Blessings! ~Ila |
| Lady of the Rebel Angels 2008-05-15 ch 7, | abuseOMG! it's like sleeping beauty in reverse (and minus the hundred years)! lurv it! please continue, i was a fan of the unrequited love but this is awesome too! and i'm glad we didn't have to hunt you down for killing legolas- i want to see how this ends |
| Ilada'Jefiv 2008-05-15 ch 7, | abuseI'm...not sure what to think of this chapter. It was definitely a shocking plot twist. I just want you to know, this is not a flame, but I was kinda disappointed. Kissing to save the life of the handsome/beautiful prince/princess is kinda cliché. I was also disappointed in the hints of deepening feelings between them. *sighs* I'm sorry to be so negative, as I've really loved this story up till now. Still, you're writing is improving on every chapter, and you do have a great deal of skill! Blessings! ~Ila |
| ForgottenReflections 2008-05-15 ch 7, | abuseI'm not sure if I like this or not...guess I'll wait for the ending to decide. As long as its not a sappy romance I'll be happy. Also, you should make Elireth die at the end. |
| Lady of the Rebel Angels 2008-05-14 ch 6, | abuseOMG! please please please post the next chapter, I can't stand cliffhangers! that was heart wrenching |
| willabeth0906 2008-05-14 ch 6, | abuseI do hope she is dreaming after drinking... |
| Lady Akyrial 2008-05-14 ch 6, | abuseYou KILLED Legolas? Unless Elireth is dreaming, this is not going to be a good ending... and you will incur the wrath / flames of many for bastardizing the canon. Legolas sailed from Arda, he was not killed there. |
| Ilada'Jefiv 2008-05-14 ch 6, | abuse*screams* NO!! You had better be bluffing! If you actually killed him, I'll - I'll... *sniffles* I'll you for the rest of my life! *crosses arms and glares* Anyway, it was another great chapter... except for the last two sentences. *sulks angrily* Once more, I have to say that your characterization of Legolas is simply wonderful. Please, please, don't kill him! *bursts into tears* I can't stand stories with character ! *peeks between her fingers* I am looking forward to the next chapter in a hope of Elireth being mistaken. So... may Legolas live, or I will hunt you down and kill you! ~Ila ;-) |
| vectis 2008-05-14 ch 6, | abuseThis chapter was great, I certainly was not expecting this turn of events, but how cruel of you to leave it on such a ending. Please update soon. |
| Azuppon 2008-05-14 ch 6, | abuseD:... What? NO! Dammit, you best update soon! XD I love your story, very well written. I am a sucker for the sort of 'unrequited love' stories. Haha. |