Your story has made me cry (I don't do the crying and a cried like a lil ** T-T) laugh, get excited blah it was a whole range of emotions that I got by reading 22 chapters. ah but I can't wait to see how this is going to turn out :3

Awesome story XD

I love your story, it's amazing All the chapters are incredible
You're a great writer, looking forward to seeing more of your work

the storyis really good a lot better than any of the ones im working on. hope you update soon and are you going to have naruto find away to make his life longer so he can watch his child grow and be in its life since his parents werent? and are you really going to put naruto and sasuke together in this story wont that mess with NarutoXHinata?

cool story. the last story was awesome as well. here is my address if you want to talk on yahoo. wolfangel896

wah... This chappie is so sad...when Sakura will talk to Sasuke? Their story on this fanfic is so gloomy...I want them to,at least talk about their little one...
and don't make talk about Naruto and Hinata... didn't they suffer enough? after all they've been through, they should just be happy... I like my Naruhina happy!
Can´t wait to read the following chappies!
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I really really liked this chapter!but my favorite part is Naruto's wish: it's so noble of him! If you could have anything in the world, like, he could ask for his lifespan to be normal again,and ask to give eternal peace to the former Hokages... that's my Naruto!
and the last part of Minato and Kushina is so fluffy!

wow...this story is getting better and better!! You did a great twist in the original plot... I like it! Phoenix the bastard!!
Great chappie!!

It's really unfair for Kiba if Sakura and Sasuke hook up. Sasuke had his chance, while Kiba was for in Sakura's times of need. Would the time she and Kiba spend together mean nothing to her?

Moving on. Things continue to get more hectic in the Hyuuga clan. It would be so much easier to kill off the Main branch half(they deserved it and more) of the clan or maybe the whole clan instead. I'm beginning to think they're a lost cause. You can't solve their problems without someone dying or traumatized in the process.

Sad that Kahoko is gone, but she helped mend things between Sasuke and Sakura. Her final moment was a happy one.

Cool Update!

wow awesome chapter!

Cool Update!

Filthy Main Branch swines, this chapter really ** me off in so many ways. I hope the entire clan goes down in shame for this. It's ironic that the Main Branch who did everything they can to glorify their precious name would be the ones responsible for bringing the ultimate dishonor to the clan.

I hope Naruto is planning to expose the Hyuuga clan's crimes to the people to further humiliate them. It would be an injustice to cover-up their crimes, especially to the victim and her family. Doing that would create more friction between the clan, but the rest of the clan are going to find out sooner or later. But there's still a problem, as long as Hao and others like him live. They would do everything they can to reinstate the Caged Bird Seal. They need to be eliminated, every breath they take gives them the opportunity to exact their unrighteous revenge.

The strong cannot be strong without someone to be weak, the rich cannot be rich without someone to be poor. I believe that is why the Main Branch values their tradition so much. To enforce inequality just so they can flaunt their superiority.

holy crap , wow awesome.

God dammit! It's one problem after another. Why does things always have to get harder for the good guys? If only Naruto isn't bound by some silly oath, he could've prevented and end all this hell. Hiashi, the Hyuuga elders, and whoever is against Naruto don't have the same convictions as Naruto. They don't give a damn about honor or the safety of others. And cause of that, they can do whatever they want and get away with it. While Naruto, who possess greater power then them, who rules over them, who's word is law, can't do jack ** but wait for the them to make a mistake. And who knows how long that will take? The Hyuuga has been doing pretty well covering up their tracks so far. And the longer this goes on, the more pain and suffering will be inflicted upon the innocent while the bad guys are getting closer to their goal.

Cool Update! Why do I get the feeling Danzo-teme is doing the blackmailing.