|Reviews for Explicit|
| mae-E 1/1/13 . chapter 1
this was a good story. i like how you started it. i thaought that was histrical! poor girl to have to deal with that.
that scene in the movies was funny. that she worked her charms on him so well that he forgot what movie they were watching. I've that moive its kind of cool!
love the play you had them go too.
good way to end it.
| Itachi's aprentice 10/5/08 . chapter 1
"You actually watch Felicity reruns." Kim shuddered.
Tommy shrugged. "I used to have a crush on the main character's first best friend. The one that left after a couple of seasons. And I don't really know why."
You really know your Amy Jo Johnson.
| NeenaD91 7/18/08 . chapter 1
This was the longest one shot i've ever read!
And with that said and done it was also the best.
Sarcastically funny which is always a plus, and hotter than Brad Pitt tap dancing naked on the burning depths of the sun.
I absolutely loved it; great work! ]
| SadJack 6/8/08 . chapter 1
Very kool. Nice to see the sequel. Hot and nicely written, But I still want to see more.
| slytherensangel26 5/15/08 . chapter 1
wow...that was incredibly HOT...damn
| jps1926 5/11/08 . chapter 1
That was even better than the first. The whole burning the kitchen down scene was absolutely priceless. I can see them still talking about at Kim's 80th birthday party or their 50th wedding anniversary. These two were nice tie overs until the conclusion of CtD and updates of your other stories.
| Alwaysright1 5/8/08 . chapter 1
Excellent. Never stop writing.
| rose19586 5/8/08 . chapter 1
Wow! I LOVED IT! It was funny, sweet and sexy!
You keep getting better and better! I cant wait for the rest of Comes the Darkness! )
| loulou4729 5/7/08 . chapter 1
My heart skipped a beat when I was scrolling through the new updates and I saw you had a new story out. I was not disappointed when reading. You have a fan for life in me. I love how corky and real the characters are, how much they have grown and shed some of the awkwardness but have still retained key elements the their personalities. It's refreshing to see someone write them in their later years so realistically. And I really love how you didn't shy away from the insecurities that Kim and Tommy have about themselves and their relationship. Your stories are such a refreshment from the other glib and poorly written T/K fics that are floating around. As like your others, this fic rocked sweetie! Thanks for the "The Grown and Sexy" pass too. *lol*
| GracefulCrane 5/6/08 . chapter 1
That was one of the mos fic I've ever read...and I LOVED it. I truly, madly, deeply LOVED this fic :). You're such an awesome writer Shawn! Keep it up :)
| EmmaLeigh325 5/6/08 . chapter 1
You're seriously gifted the way you can make me crack up and think a very girly aw in the same story. And I loved how you referenced Amy Jo Johnson in Felicity. Keep it up, you've got real talent :)Emma
| grits 5/6/08 . chapter 1
you ar writting god
i love it
cant wait to read another
| SYuuri 5/6/08 . chapter 1
I have been counting days and you finally posted the story! ;) The "you live closer to Winnie the Pooh than civilization" line still cracked me up. It's a wonderful, entertaining read (and HOT!) and I'm so glad that we TK fans have such a great writer like you. Now I'll stop talking so you could go back to finishing CtD :) Take care.