Reviews for Looking For Comfort

Reviews For: Looking For Comfort

lazylunatic 2008-09-15 ch 1, anon.	abuseit was ok. just keep on writing. i'm not very good at giving reviews. i don't like Louise very much. and the situation was a bit surreal, romanticized but with not enough sparks to light it up. i guess it was a bit boring. but as i said, just keep on writing, i think you have potential. the way you write is not excellent, but you can improve that. just read a lot of romance novels, i learned a lot from them. if you haven't yet, try any of Julie Garwood's. i've read every single one of them and they are all excellent. and ofcourse the malory novels by johanna lindsey. well, good luck=)
SiriuslyBwitched 2008-08-05 ch 1,	abuseWow, totally bittersweet. Great job!
screamxheart 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abuseThat was pretty genius.
crazyanimallvr93 2008-05-24 ch 1,	abusenice, sad ending though, there could be a second chapter though, i can actually picture a story line not a oneshot
Blue-Eyed Chica 2008-05-09 ch 1,	abuseaw its so sad! but i love
JustAnotherCrazyWriter 2008-05-07 ch 1,	abuseTwo ways I could start this review: -You break my heart. hears big cracking noise OR -screams MY VIRGIN 13-YR-OLD EYES!! Lols. Just joking ;) 'Cept not about the 13-year-old bit. Or the virgin... ANYWAYS: Unexpected endings are my secret love. Or not-so-secret now. Anyways, you totally pwned at that. Do you notice that only people who write/read fanfics or are computer nerds know what "pwn" means? :D Getting off-topic again. So sorry, I kinda skipped the whole smut thing, (not really, kinda skimmed it is more like) and I gather they had hot monkey sex? Not that I don't like smut... cowers from author in fear But i love it how they do it out in the open against a wall. :D Oh, how I'd love to be Louise. Wouldn't we all though? sigh But now she's getting married, and Sirius will always be there in the recesses of her mind... giggles Anyways, to cap it all off... Love the one-shot, keep up with your awesome writing and smut-ful-ness. -Jen.
this-love-is-sirius 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseThis was a good oneshot.
Toad321 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseSo sad... but good!
Mocha-Java Boost 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseYou totally pwn! -giggles- Seriously Polkster, I think you could give Danielle Steele a run for her money! OR! Since I have decided that my backup career will be a porn directer (hahahaha) you could come work for me! Wed be totally rich! XD x
Yazzi 2008-05-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseCUTE. You know I love it :D You reign supreme !! My head hurts and I have to leave in a bit, so bye Milly-uno !! xoxox
muzical 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abusethat was a TOTALLY unexpected ending! wonderful!
mildetryth 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseAw! I was all 'oh naughty!' and grinning and then... Oh! Talking about a non-expected ending!
Glass.Ink 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abusewow! i really loved that! it was brilliant! ur a very talented writer!

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