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nekoshieo-san 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful! I loved every moment of it!
flaming-amber 2008-06-14 ch 24,	abuseWell, as long as its a well-written story about an OC and a vamp, I'll take it... just dont use Zero... too many complications and cliche... The trend seems to be Aido X OC... not complaining since I do so love seeing the mighty and the proud fall haha... Kaname is dying? Somehow, I'm kind of conflicted over that sort of ending although I think that if he died, it would really be a realistic ending... very tough though... regardless of your decision, I'll love it (i know it)... haha... Then again, maybe there's a miracle cure ne?
faithful19 2008-06-13 ch 24,	abusedude loved it up until the end. wish you had him say that he loved her clearly. o well. and what about yuuki and zero?
elemental heiress 2008-06-13 ch 24,	abuseAWW!So sad!What a good ending though.No one ever has the courage to make a sad ending to a story,Very good job!I can't wait for your next story
arya21 2008-06-13 ch 24,	abuseI actually liked the ending...good for kaname!! sorry, I just hate him...good job zero! you killed him!! I look forward to your future stories!!
nebulaX 2008-06-13 ch 24,	abuseOMFG, this deserves a sequel mann! Lol, I mean, it just closed off too abruptly, that's all Im trying to say, and a few more sentences wouldn't have hurt. But its your story so whatever floats your boat is fine with me^^ Either way, excellent fanfiction! Mushy at times, yes, but we all need drama in our lives. I can't wait for your new fanfic! A male character might be nice! By the way, it would be great if you read my VK fanfic, REFUGEE, it's got 3 OCs! (1 female, and 2 males) but its very mysterious and interesting(well in my aspect, I dont mean to brag lol) and I would really like a review from your perspective 'cause your story really touched me. And your picture, grr, I really need to sit down and do it, lol. TTYL!
Dragon0fDarkness 2008-06-13 ch 24,	abuseno you cant end it like that...nonononono! you are so cruel!! please end it another way..please...well anyway ill be waiting for a miracle to happen, thanks for the awsesome story!! your writing rocks!
Cara-Mae-Chan 2008-06-09 ch 1,	abuseO MA DAIS! Does this Amaya fall in love with Kaname?!? Does she, does she, does she?!? Or does Kaname still love Yuukii?? Ya have ta tell me before I continue! Teehee
faithful19 2008-06-08 ch 23,	abusedude i hope you get them together soon and show that things clear up btwn him and yuuki.
elemental heiress 2008-06-08 ch 23,	abuseGreat chapter.They've been really sad lately.I hope it gets happy soon.Anyways plz continue soon.
flaming-amber 2008-06-08 ch 23,	abuseI cannot believe that you are adding something so BIG, so late in the fic... I mean, I figured that Sayuri is a part of Amaya's family that had 'abandoned' her because of our weak blood however, Amaya's blood would've saved her? This old burned down house, was Amaya's home? Why was it burned? Where are the rest of her family? I was feeling a bit like I was tossed back and forth... Maybe I was reading the fic way too fast, but doesn't it seem like Kaname is at two places at one time? I mean, how could he still be recovering and loathing each moment of his seemingly new found 'humanity' (since he does have a conscience) and be by Amaya's side... Whatever happened to "just go"?! Haha... I'm happily confounded. Hope that you can shed some light on this. In the mean time, I'll go right ahead and read it a second time (and probably a third time too)... I think that your fic is getting so long that you should probably think of wrapping up for now and starting a sequel instead. That way you can do sufficient wool gathering and scheming of course... I mean, even like this you could probably go and run off on us... In a manga, this would probably be the heart-stopping page at the end of a volume that screams _ WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE. :-) I love to hate Kaname... He's way too in touch with the all too human struggle between want and need... he's complex and yet simple. my overly analytical mind goes haywire because I can't pin him down to being a sadist or a masochist...
nebulaX 2008-06-08 ch 23,	abuseWoah! Kaname doesn't give up does he?? Lol jk! But awesome chapter though! Please write more! I want to know what happens to Kaname, Amaya and then her sister, if coincidently, she suddenly comes alive maybe? lol. And I shall have your picture done soon! Sorry, finals got in the way^^
littleanjel 2008-06-06 ch 22,	abuseoh my...why!...kaname just say that you love her!please update soon dont keep me hanging
flaming-amber 2008-06-06 ch 22,	abuseWould it be possible that I now have a built in 6th sense for when you update?! I've been loitering around the net today and then after having a good cry (because I just had a "fated to love you" marathon)(that's a chinese drama, the first one I ever watched, simply because I'm not too impressed by chinese dramas), I had this feeling that if I checked again (to the VK fandom) I would find YOU there... and lo and behold! I hope that you're not feeling to pressured to update your story. I mean, as much as I love your fic, there is reality to speak of... Sometimes readers forget that you know. Most of us are just blood sucking leeches that need people like you who can pump out a new fantasy for us to chew on... But in reality, you're the same as us too. You have exams to study for, assignments to write (in my case), a job to do, people to meet... etc. etc. So, please take care of yourself first. If you pressure yourself too much, it WILL affect your writing. The fact that you have a wonderful story and a great following is no coincidence. So no worries. We're faithful, we won't hate you if you don't update as often as you do (which was incredible i tell you)... This chapter did little for the frustration that has been building up in my system over the last few chapters... I thought that perhaps Kaname would set things straight. But now, he's really done it. He's really f()cked... if you don't mind me saying... What's really weird in this chapter is that it would seem that Yuuki and Amaya's position in Kaname's heart/mind (whatever it is he has) has swapped... "But she had something Amaya didn’t" I'm not sure what that means but it * me off... haha... Well, you've done very well because in such a small chapter, you managed to get a rise out of me - I can't wait for when you update again! Now, let Amaya get a little breather, poor thing needn't fight so hard.
elemental heiress 2008-06-06 ch 22,	abuseAW!That was so sad!Plz continue soon.

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