Gotta say, I loved the sticky ending. lol. Sorry at the pervy humor. Anyway I really enjoyed the story. It's not often I can find a good Cloud/Yuffie story, never mind the fact that there are so few of them anyway.

I cannot understand why you have so few reviews. The story is witty, amusing, wonderful... and smutty. ;D

good job!

interesting chapter sounds like i really missed quite a bit with the last chapter. funny conclusion though.

damn i tried the link and replacing the dots and slashes and got nothing this is followed by the usual w DOT correct? that's it? well if you can somehow send me the link or somethin that'd be great.

loved the ending of the chapter lol. nice conversations. huh i like how she gets cloud to open up and doesn't even listen it does fit her though

love the chapter title nice irony there.

i like their interaction and it fits nicely with the title. pretty funny but if this is a clouffie it's quite a way to start...

another good chapter. i love how you portrayed yuffie running for her life and yet still her mind wanders. lol

She squinted, her legs still pumping even as she slipped and slid down the sandy hill. Was that - it was! "A campfire! Praise Leviathan!" Yuffie yelled, filled with a sudden burst of energy. There seemed to be a small, dark figure moving away from the camp. Yuffie couldn't complain; more targets meant more chance for her to escape her fate as worm bait. She'd figure out who'd generously offered to get eaten in her place and send his or her family a plaque to honour their noble sacrifice when she got back to headquarters.--lol and seems rather yuffie-like

nice first chapter really good job with cloud's character.

I'm not really a Cloud/Yuffie fan but this was funny and entertaining, and kept their interactions pretty realistic. I liked it a lot! :)

I hate to bother you about this, and I'm sure others have... but The LJ account mentioned in this chapter doesn't seem to exist. other than that, very well written up to this point.

That was definately a cute, funny, amazing, -blabs on and on- story. :3 I'm really happy you wrote this - oddball pairings seem to draw me. XD; Anyway, wonderful story. I especially love the oil and water lines (who doesn't?) and the donut scene in this chapter (who doesn't?), as well as Cloud sticking to the floor. xD Please write more when you have the chance, and take care!

Haha that was great!

Interesting fic. I thought they went from sniping at each other to finding out what kind of panties Yuffie had on awful quick, but it was witty and generally a fun read to hold me over until the next Memento Vivere update.

I've always had a soft spot for Cloud/Yuffie, even if it's hard to make it believable considering Aeris and Tifa have him pretty much sewn up between them.

With other authors I'd have my doubts with a yuffiexcloud pairing. Not with you though. Great job. Thanks for a very entertaining read. Your characterization of Yuffie is reminiscent of Ain't Like I Planned. I laughed out loud a lot.