 WammyHouseWhore 2009-05-29 . chapter 1jam-laced poisoned mind
FOR SOME REASON...I LIKED THIS LINE MOST |
 Crimson Cupcake 2009-03-06 . chapter 1So sad...-sniff- The last sentence was really...-sob- Poor poor B-kun... |
 HannahSheep 2008-09-24 . chapter 1I really really loved this.
Great job! |
 Star Jinin 2008-09-15 . chapter 1I always thought B's insanity always had something to do with the fact that he could 'see' death, but I'm glad you took a different approach. Very cute. |
 Stephi 2008-08-15 . chapter 1 amazingly fantastic! poor little Beyond! i love your word choice, and the mood and rhythym of the peice. It's almost as if the story is a soft lullaby, and when I read the lines
"That was till the B-Box broke.
And along went his sanity and memories." the peaceful lullaby stops with a clash of disharmonious chords.
...
can you tell I like music? ^/^ |
 Garowyn 2008-07-27 . chapter 1I liked this! Good work. |
 J Plash 2008-05-20 . chapter 1J from dn_contest here :)
Fascinating idea. I love Watari trying so hard to look after them all, I love B's childish need, I love L's skepticism about the change, and I LOVE this line: "then was he reminded he once belonged to himself." That one makes the fic.
It's not as good as your other stuff (being your first fic and all :P), but it has a nice undercurrent to it, a kind of quiet pain that hangs after it finishes, and that's lovely.
J |
 The Flying Hot Pocket 2008-05-13 . chapter 1 Very good. An interesting concept. the "B-Box", very funny idea. |
 OrigamiDresses 2008-05-06 . chapter 1Ah so sad :( The "B-Box" was a really cute idea though. i really enjoyed reading that. :3 |
 Aja-Armani 2008-05-06 . chapter 1you don't find too many stories about B.i wish there was more. |