Honey the Cat? Are you serious? I hope you update this, I'm quite curious to see what will happen next.

interesting. i like the writing style you used. it's like, you hear the personal thoughts in simply-worded structures. it works well. =)

If you're still around, please update. This story is wonderful.

Wow, that was... eerie... ME LIKES! -faves- XD Besides a couple of typos, that was FREAKIN' AMAZING! "Kill her like you killed me." HOLY CRAP THAT WAS BRILLIANT!

~When darkness falls, heroes will rise~
~Swift~

Setting aside the occasional rogue typo observed here, I must admit: this is masterful.