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| Snowdove30 2008-07-08 ch 13,  | abuseAmazing story. Eagerly waiting to see how they get out of the cave and what the results of the ritual will be. Hope you update soon :) |
| Seph 2008-07-07 ch 13, anon. | abuseNice Cliffy, great story, i will definately keep reading. |
| potterinu 2008-07-07 ch 13, | abuseInteresting. I hope there will be some action soon instead of just learning and making plans. |
| im100HPGWandRWHG 2008-07-07 ch 4, | abusePUAJ!! Man, why? You have just sent a perfectly good story to the rubbish bin! It was good before, but in the moment you showed Harry kissing Hermione the story's worth dropped from a 7.5/10 to a -10/10! This story isn't worth the space in KB it has within this webpage. Please, don't be so stupid and change all of this so that it is Ginny the one Harry kisses, or at least say from the start that this is a H/Hr. |
| imgonnadie 2008-07-06 ch 13, | abuseExcellent story so far. Please do continue to write. I eagerly await your next chapter. |
| DarkStrider 2008-07-06 ch 13, | abuseWoo! great stuff. A tad over-eager on the exposition however. The phrase 'show, not tell' is something you might consider. I do love the way you are actually actively deepening the HP universe however, and am very eager to see more. |
| Dr Grimm 2008-07-06 ch 13, | abusebrilliant story |
| slashslut 2008-07-05 ch 13, | abuseupdate soon! |
| slashslut 2008-07-05 ch 9, | abuseholy crap! that was the most satisfying end to snape ive EVER read! wow! |
| slashslut 2008-07-05 ch 8, | abusethis chapter had me laughing out loud from dumbles hunt for the dark colonel to luna going to mcgonell for adice to win over harry to "sate his dark lusts." ROTFL! |
| slashslut 2008-07-05 ch 7, | abusei wholly agree with you that it's nice to see harry getting something done without landing in peril or the hospital every chapter. and a sly!luna . . . that's just genius. ive always had a soft side for her character and i really like how you've made her not just aware (as has been done in other stories) but sneaky and sly as well! who would suspect her? and that just opens the door for so many delightful possibilities!! |
| slashslut 2008-07-05 ch 2, | abuseoh bravo! loved how harry stood up for himself but wasnt an "evil git" to do it;) |
| messhnhs 2008-07-04 ch 13, | abuseI just found this Fic and i must say I'm impressed. Excellent story so far and i can't wait to read more so update soon. |
| firewingTM 2008-07-04 ch 6, | abuseColonel Sanders! Honestly. Are you trying to say Malfoy and Co. are chickens? Loved the pun. |
| Murphyangel 2008-07-04 ch 13, | abuseGreat chapter! |