Sweet! For a second I thought it was Sam. Update soon

WHY?! These awesome unfinished stories are just killing me! This one, in particular is fabulous. So unique and I'm dying to see it finished. maybe you'll rediscover it for us? PLEASE?

Gah! Yet another story I would've loved to see finished.

I also wanted to shake Hyde, tell him to wake up and help Jackie out. He knows something's wrong with her (she's seriously depressed), and yet he's doing nothing (yet). I wish I could've seen him finally take action. But his passivity is interesting. He's protecting himself, doesn't want to get hurt because he still loves her - but he doesn't trust her (or trust that she loves/loved him). So he keeps ignoring his instincts to help her.

I *so* thought it was Sam with Hyde's kid... and I was *so* happy it was Laurie with Fez's kid. Awesome red herring - and great twist.

Oh, wow, that was amazing! Your idea for this story is very original and your writing just beautiful. I would like to read what happened next very much - I hope that one day you'll come back and finish this piece!

Good. Hope you update soon.

great story, please keep writing!

I hope you continue! I feel so bad for Jackie - you can just feel her anguish.

I really hope you update this story some day!

you can't just leave us like this!

it's too good!

PLEASE UPDATE!

oh please continue! I love this story! It really gets to me

I sort of want this story to be updated after "Imagine," just from reading the three chapters you have up. It's an amazing story, even when reading it, reading about Jackie getting closer and closer to self-destructing, makes me feel so horribly cut up inside.

It's hard to describe how I feel about this fic, but I'll try. It's like roses and razor blades combined. It is beautiful and painful and I can't stop watching it.

On the plus side, I am SO glad you chose not to have Sam be the baby's mama! Things are complicated between Hyde and Jackie as it is. Laurie's introduction was a wonderful twist at the end of this chapter.

Please finish this story. The dreamstuff's got me curious, and I want to see Donna and Fez get smooshed like the annoying, bloodsucking mosquitoes they are!

OMG what an ending for this chapter! Very well written. I can't wait to see what happens!

please update!

Please update soon! It is so good!