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| StillrockininWisconsin 2008-07-08 ch 3,  | abuseYay! A new chapter! And a non-son-of-a-stripper. Phew. Your writing is fantastic. You capture the emotions perfectly. I hope you start to update weekly again. :) |
| Mongoosie 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseAs the parody of M. Night Shamahlan would say on Robot Chicken: What a twist! I love your stories! Glad you're back. |
| Princess-Sparkly-Swirls 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseBravo, very nice twist with the Laurie plot. Well done ^_^ I hope you'll update soon :) |
| sometimestheycallmejackie 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseHOLY SHIT! Great update! |
| SkittlezLvr79 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseOh! This was heartbreaking. Jackie's lost herself and trying to hold onto a jerk like Fez by lowing her standards is just so sad. Hehehe, I can't wait until Fez gets his little surprise! Awesome job! |
| Angie38 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseMan I so didn't see that comin! What a great chapter! |
| Jessa416 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseYou have to update this story ASAP! Now I can not sleep! I wish I could see a little more J/H fluff, even in a dramatic way though! Great story! |
| Jessa416 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI HAD to review before I started to read this because I know even now that I have finally found a writer that wrote a great J/H fic. I am so sick of not finding any well written ones! |
| jackiehyde4eva 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abuseom my god i did not expect this ok i really hate fez right now i wanna hit him i feel so sorry for jACKIE i love the way you write it conveys such emotion and really makes you feel i just want em to be together uh is this gonna be a happy ending story? anyway awesum job |
| celticfire99 2008-07-08 ch 3, | abusepoor Jackie! They are so mean to her! I'm so glad that the baby was Laurie and Fez's and not Sam and Hyde's. Great story! I look forward to the next chapter! |
| Hyde's Bride 2008-07-07 ch 3, | abuseI knew it! I just knew it was Laurie with Fez's kid. At first you had me freaking out thinking it was Sam with Steven's son, and that was beyond upseting, but then it occured to me that it was just your clever trickery. Awesome! This story is already very deep. Poor Jackie. No one cares about her, and the whole bridge/suicide thing is a scary thought. And Donna is such a witch!! That's exactly how she was in season 8, a terrible friend. Anyway, I really like this so far so please update soon!! |
| ash 2008-07-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseoh good god hyde go to her! lol and poor jackie! i hope nothing TOO drastic happens for hyde to realize that somethings wrong. and PHEW the baby is fez's! yay! its not the stripper slut having hydes baby! good job on this update. you could really feel the emotion jackie is feeling. update soon! |
| teart 2008-07-06 ch 2, | abuseI'm on pins and needles waiting for an update. I hate to be pushy, but come on, write! write! write! |
| writersblock142 2008-05-22 ch 2, | abusewow this story is godd!! can't wait to find out about the girl and also im not liking fez or donna much at the mo |
| dengal90 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseDonna is such a bitch and i feel so sad for Jackie, she's surrounded by horrible enemies/friends! The whole baby thing is worrying... Great update though, loving the story. |