 Crysta Mayville 2008-06-17 . chapter 1Aww, that was sweet. That is totally one of my new fave ships! |
 Nicole Kazan 2008-06-04 . chapter 1That was wonderful as usual. :) I could really picture everything and it was so sad/sweet. Poor Claire. i was kinda annoyed at her for acting so cool after that one time she cried but then placated myself saying that she was only holding it all inside of her like you described.
Sawyer is great and in character. And i hope that Claire escapes from the Islands mind control or whatever it is and comes back and they can develop more friendship between them. I don't think i would mind if, after a long time for Claire to mourn Charlie and Sawyer to get over Kate, they had them get together. But then again PB&J is my absolute favorite ship (followed very closely by Desmond/Penny)
"And so, in an attempt to atone his mistake, Sawyer made what he thought was the most meaningful speech of his entire life." -best part!
I am so glad i read this. Thank you for writing. |
 Ryan Brooklyn 2008-06-03 . chapter 1Poor, poor Claire! That was heartwrenching (but very well written). Great job writing for Claire's grief. Her questions are very real and easy to relate to. And I love Sawyer trying to comfort her even though being "nice" isn't what he's really known for. Keep up the good work. :-D |
 LuvtoWrite 2008-05-10 . chapter 1Aw! That was so sweet and sad :( I REALLY like Sawyer now...he's so cool :)
Great story! |
 Miss Bree-tea. 2008-05-07 . chapter 1I still can't get over the death of Charlie. It's just so sad. This story was so beautifully written it made me cry. It was just so sad. |
 Stephy. [Your Best friend] :D 2008-05-06 . chapter 1 SAWYER!
*fangirl moment*
YAY!
I loved this one, Girl.
Sawyer is amazing and that was SO cute.
Claire and Sawyer are FRIENDS! |