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| Baliansword 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuse“Your mother would guard the girl and her child with her life, Alexander,” Antigonous said... I found that amazingly ironic, considering what Olympias did to Philip's new wife and child. However, I very much liked this. I think overall you have a very strong piece. I liked it very much, and would love to see a continuation. ~Baliansword |
| Anise 2008-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseMay has been an absolutely crazy month so I'm sorry I missed this story until now especially since the conversation between all of them was really well done. Despite how everyone may go about trying to get their feelings across (alexander included) they all have legitimate points, unfortunately they don't necessarily line up with each other, you did a wonderful job of getting all of that across. On a more fun note, I loved the guys interaction with Cleitus I could read a whole story just about Alexander and Hephaestion teasing and/or seducing him ;) As I've come to expect from you another great read, I always look forward to your stuff :) |
| Norrsken 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseVery late R&R on this. My apologies. No need for apology. Your story bring us a good background to why Alexander didn't marry before his glorious campaign. The beginning is so beautiful. with Hephaestion at the lake, and their youg love. It is a pity that they are interrupted, but good that Cleitus comes to warn them. It would have been even worse if the Generals had come as a surprise... The Macedonian court intrigues are horrible. Alexander is right in not subjecting an innocent wife and children to this, especially not to Olympias' *tender* mercies. You give us a beautiful description of Hephaestion's good character and appearance. One understands why Alexander doesn't want to marry at all ! All the best wishes, // NorthernLight |
| Yolass 2008-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseAt last! I was already desperate for one of your stories! But it's really worth waiting for them, this new "delivery" is fresh and sexy and full of poetry and, as usual, at least to me, very realistic ... I do hope we don't have to wait so much for your next update ... either for a different story or maybe a second part to this one? Hope to read you soon! Yolass |
| roxene 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuse"I'm enjoying the view." - and I'm enjoying your stories, thank you:) |
| Grecian1 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseI'm very bad at leaving feedback to people but I thought it was about time that I let you know how much I enjoy your stories and this one is no exception. I love the way that you characterise both Alexander and particularly Hephaistion. I always feel that there is always something slightly vulnerable and innocent about him without him appearing weak and unworthy of Alexander. By the way, you cannot have too much of a good thing and the image of Hephaistion standing in the lake is definately a good thing, so I am very happy that you 'stole' the image. |
| keri 2008-05-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI am always on the lookout for stories that deal with Alexander's felings for Hephaestion as viewed by the others. This story captured a little of that, but it also touched on the intense feelings that must have existed between the two. Instead of just making it a sexual relationship, as many stories do, you presented us with the true connection that must have been there. Thank you, keri |