great story

I like! I like! u deffie caught me offguard on who was talking... I thought it was jarod, that is until he was mentioned... where was angelo? *curious*

thanks for writing this! I like! I like!

Love the concept.

4138. That's spiffy.

I always wondered if the entire thing was really just Jarod dreaming or something silly. I like this idea much better though. Miss Parker's insane and making it all up. Much love for this story. :)

Ok, so the whole thing with Parker chasing Jarod is a dilusion, she thinks she's at the Centre but shes really locked up in a nut house. I like it.

::gasps::

ever interisting i feal that way some times :)

Very disturbing. Very.

Wow. Nicely done and kinda creepy in very cool way. What a neat angle.

Nice twist to The Pretender-universe

This was a really cute idea. I loved it. Keep it up. :)

I've read this fic a couple times, and I like it a lot. Leaves you wondering...

Awesome story:) Nice twist. You should really do a sequel and explore this further...

Very odd, but good nonetheless.

It's ok. There is something wrong with it. It's Broots not Bruce BROOTS.

I really liked that.