All the characters were in character which is rare for a lot of fanfics good job! I finally found your fanfiction account. If you can't tell by the username who I am.

Love it...all the better since it's Kaname x yuuki :P

great story! i cant wait for more kaname and yuki action ;) update ASAP!!

Kaname has been one of my favorite characters of the anime, along with Zero, and I find it adorable how he fuses over Yuki while she's oblivios of it. Yet he is a vampire but hides all the 'ugly' aspects of his instincts. It made everything believable.
I liked it, it was believable and cute!

Wonderful and well-written! That part of the manga did make me wonder how Kaname was feeling.