That was pretty moving.I had tears in my eyes when reading this it was probably the best piece of fan fic i've ever read in a long time.So yeah i will admit that was good.

This was a nice Derek & John piece. This kind of fic is kinda rare.
We seen to few good moments between Uncle and nephew.

Although I enjoyed this one, I have to say that you had some really cheesy moves here!

Pressing the "ohh,aww" factor by introducing a sister with a bright future ahead and a puppy was a bit of a overkill.

But beside that, the rest was well done, and I love how the interaction between the two of them turned out.

Cheers!

Ooh, this was good. I like the idea of Derek and Kyle having a sister! I wanted to write a fic about this scene... This kind of inspired me. :] Good job, and thanks for the read.