Reviews for Alone Without You

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jbfan07 2008-07-07 ch 29,	abuseawe. i wish ellie would just realize nick is enough.
jobrosx33333 2008-07-07 ch 29,	abusei love ur story keep writing
joejonasbabe 2008-07-06 ch 29,	abuseawe thats sad..CONTINUE
supergurl03 2008-07-05 ch 29,	abuseI totally luved it! Did ayden see thatshe cut her self? Kep on posting
CassieMcParrland 2008-07-05 ch 29, anon.	abuseI really love your story. The only thing I wish you would do differently is the way you quote your characters. I normally don't notice grammar mistakes; nor do I care if I find them. But if you quote it the right way it makes it much easier than the story is currently. Example... "Your wrong you know, love is enough..And your father is a drunk Ellie! I wish you could see you don't need him!" He said as I wiped a stray tear from my cheek. I looked up at him. "I wish I could to." I said as I pulled the strap up to my back pack. I opened the door. "I have to go Joe." I said. "See ya E." He said and left. I put me head against the steering wheel and sighed. Just a sugesstion. I really love your story and bring back Nick please!
imoddsandends 2008-07-05 ch 29,	abuseaww they really need each other! update soon :)
Underdog.Love 2008-07-05 ch 29,	abuseaw :( that was so sad. i really really hope ellie goes back to the jonas's! and makes up with nick. and joe and kev for that matter, not that they're fighting, but there's a little tension i think..haha. they can all be there for her though, i know they care about her a lot. :\ update soon! :) i love this!
JONASCRAZYY 2008-07-05 ch 29,	abusemore please !
ForeverEmily 2008-07-05 ch 29,	abuseaww cute.
muzic-is-4-life 2008-07-05 ch 29,	abuseThat was really sad but still GOOD! I hipe nick comes back in the story soon! you're a great writer. keep on rockin'
ThenxtMrsNickJonas 2008-07-05 ch 29,	abusethat was sad...poor ellie! and poor nick!! i hope nick doesnt go too insane without ellie... update soon!
izzyjonasx3 2008-07-05 ch 29,	abuseShort, but good. Can't wait for a longer next chapter! ...WITH NICK! MUST HAVE NICK. NOW. NOW NOW NOW! hahaa! :)
Natalie 2008-07-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey, So. I spent some of my morning reading this, and I have to say. I really like this. Well - written, with grammar mistakes now and there, but everyone does that. I really liked the plot, how you made me paint a picture in my head. I enjoyed how you got to the point, instead of normal stories that drag along and take forever for the characters to be together. I like how their was suspense, and it was a drama filled story. I hope she comes to her senses about Nick, and get's back with them. They are inseparable This indeed was a delight to read, nice job!.
sprpiff 2008-07-05 ch 1,	abuseI didn't read the story. I didn't need to. I already know that it should not be here. Before I continue, let me quote the TOS: "You agree not to use the service to [...] upload Author Fiction without prior permission from the parties appearing in the story" Unless you miraculously have contact with the Jonas Brothers and they have agreed to appear in your story, which I highly doubt, this fic is in violation of the TOS. Not only is it that, it is in the wrong section. A Cinderella Story has NOTHING to do with the Jonas Brothers, so it makes no sense that you would post the story in here. For another thing, it's fairly creepy that you're such a fangirl that you are actually WRITING STORIES about REAL PEOPLE that you obviously love and wish you were going out with. Please, live out your fantasies IN YOUR MIND and let us normal people see stories here that are QUALITY. Oh, and for a real tip: dialogue works like this: "Hello," she said. Not, "Hello." she said. Also, new speaker, new line! Sincerely, the Society for the Protection of Real People in FanFiction.
partystarter 2008-07-04 ch 6,	abuseHey! i just started reading your story and it made me think about something haha i live in nj and my friends sisters friend [ hahah ] went to school with the jonas brothers hah and shes was saying nick like never talked joe and hilarious and kevin was kinda a show off. I cant imagine kevin being showoffy ...anyway i love your story hah a :]

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