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| mrawgirl09 2008-06-22 ch 3,  | abusei'll make this short 'cause my mom's hating fanfics, and thinks i'm doing my homework.. anyways, DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW MUCH I WAITED FOR THIS?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! i mean, i LOVE these kinds of stories, and YOU FINALLY gave them! GAH!! uhm... i'm REALLY sorry that i'm asking this but,P L E A S E .. could you PUHLEASE update a 'little' sooner? I"M SORRY!*runs off screaming* |
| Queklain 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseOMG! Nick! WTF happened to you? Well, I really love this fanfic. :D I can't wait the next chapter! |
| Neo112336 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseI still think Iris needs to be in this. But anyway, I hate Phoenixhobo. He bothers me. I just wanted to beat him up so much. |
| Tyr'll 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseWas that last guess of Larry's right? Context of the surrounding words sure made it sound like it was the right answer, even if it sounded ridiculous. Can't wait until the next chapter! |
| KareFactor 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseWowzers. I had typos in my other review. Oh well. Ahh.. I love Edgeworth's shock of Phoenix having a child. "...Eighteen?!" Haha, that was amazing. I guess I know why Feenie doesn't want Mia channeled.. Update soon! |
| lilacbird 2008-06-21 ch 3, | abuseI hope you update soon! I like it! But I want to slap Mr Wright. I've taken to calling him that. He's not Phoenix any more. |
| GumshoeLover 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseThis is getting better and better. Please update soon! |
| The blackdash 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseAhaha! Oh man! Larry really is the eccentric type! I really wonder how he gets himself girls... Hm... LOL! Great chapter btw! I'm looking forward to the next one! |
| naive-wanderer 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseOh god, this chapter really made me laugh, but it makes me sad, too. Dammit, Phoenix, why'd you have to act so weird and let your life fall apart. >:( And I feel bad for Trucy, actually, even though she's a happy character. I love your handle on GS4 Phoenix, and your interpretations of the earlier cast seven years later. :) Can't wait for the next part! |
| Neo112336 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE THIS. LOVE LOVE LOVE. Keep working. ♥ AND BRING MOAR CHAPTERS. I love how much of a jerk Naruhobo is. You should bring in Iris. |
| KareFactor 2008-06-05 ch 2, | abuseGreat. Ah, I wanna see where this is going. It's interesting. Ah, Hobonick, so mean. Edgey's dream kinda was kinda weird.. |
| Anie 2008-06-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseThat last line? "He sang very, very loudly in the shower that morning." Classic, man! *thumbs up* Loved it! |
| Bradley Redfield 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuseI have a few theories on things that could happen. Though I did some research related to this personality disorder business. But I won't say anything just yet. I'd like to see what you come up with before that in the next few chapters. |
| mrawgirl09 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuse... gah.. Edgeworth sings in Showers? ... Okay... Anyways, Their reactions are really QUITE the hilarity! I can't wait to see.. ahem, read their faces when Edgey FINALLY Sees Phoenix's COLD STARE! KABOOM! oh, and Edgey imagines Oldbag with BOOBS!?!?!?!?! UGH! BAD MENTAL IMAGE!AWAY!!AWAY!!... i wonder how they'll react to Apollo? i mean, Trucy's Phoenix's daughter, and Apollo is Trucy's half bro, so... that makes Phoenix Apollo's Dad, too? oh... i just imagined Apollo calling Phoenix-Dad. Trucy's Daddy and Apollo's Dad... nice.*smiles* |
| The blackdash 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuseInteresting. I might continue reading this if it's interesting enough. lol. |