Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Search
Reviews for: The Other Girl
Officer Hot-Pants 3/14/12 . chapter 1
G'ahhhh, a real shame you dropped this; it definitely had potential. Oh well.
chronodekar 10/31/11 . chapter 1
Amusing Idea. :)

Pity you stopped.

-chronodekar
Rubel 1/25/09 . chapter 1
Oh man the crack. Keep up the awesome work.
Darkwind666 10/16/08 . chapter 1
more! this story has a lot go for it
kidcrud 10/5/08 . chapter 1
This is a preety cool story update soon
Seth O. Blade 7/17/08 . chapter 1
Gaijin is foreigner, and pretty good for an X-Over, not many people get such a good start on O!MG and Love Hina.

Keep up the good work,

Seth O. Blade.
Lord-Emmanuel-Darkov 6/29/08 . chapter 1
nice, please update. why do characters always end up with abusive girlfriends. i mean seriously? the creators of the show must be messed up for the main guy to alway fall for the girl that beats him up the most. what the fuckin' hell! i like this for showing what these girls truly are. meh... please update
Firehedgehog 6/5/08 . chapter 1
amusing fic
YoukoTaichou 5/24/08 . chapter 1
I believe the term for foreigner is gaijin.
SailorNova007 5/20/08 . chapter 1
the word is gaijin and this is a good story please update soon
animefan29 5/20/08 . chapter 1
Wow! Can't say that I know Love Hina, but I do know the plotline. Adding in OH! My Goddess'es Mara as a friend of Keitaro is and is going to be out for the Hina girls' blood is BRILLIANT! Hope to see more.
dogbertcarroll 5/16/08 . chapter 1
Loved the last line. Interesting fic.
Return to Top