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The Riddle Heir
2009-06-19 . chapter 1
this freaking story made me cry for freaking ever! though i love it, it's simply sad as your dog dying... :'(
juz-dream
2009-06-18 . chapter 1
aw.
it was really heart-wrenching ><
SASUNARU LOVE FOREVER!
keep it up :D
Nimfel93
2009-06-13 . chapter 1
poor Sasuke i was so shocked wen u said Naruto died at the end u caught me off guard, ur an amazing writter and i hope u get somewhere in life with this, i wish to be as good as u.
Hopeful Forgotten
2009-05-19 . chapter 1
This story made me cry so hard.

You took me totally by surprise when you said he'd died... I thought he'd broken up with Sasuke or something -- yeah, you did that on purpose -- and I was shouting in my head about how Naruto was a douche and then you had to go and say he was dead and everything was suddenly very silent in my head while I stared at the screen, tears building in my eyes.

You did Sasuke's emotions very well. Death, especially of someone you love with all your heart, someone you gave your heart to, is so hard. I've experianced loss and betrayal in my life time so I can totally say that you're right on with the whole keeping Naruto's stuff thing, and especially with the accusing. You feel like that person has abandoned you and, as much as this doesn't make sense, died on purpose.

~Hopeful Forgotten
Maximum Potter
2009-04-11 . chapter 1
*wipes away a tear* BRAVA!! All that needs to be said.
perfidiouspink
2009-03-17 . chapter 1
AH! You depressing bastard! lol That was an unexpected ending. Great perspective and good story.
KL Lover
2009-03-11 . chapter 1
Haha, that's a good question: if you don't like angst, why write it? Hmm. Oh well, haha. I absolutely love angst. Why? For the very reason you hate it. I'm kind of like Sai in the sense that I don't feel many emotions so I read stories that make me feel something, haha. Jeez. But I like reading funny stories of romantic fluffiness or something along the lines of that (like Welcome to Yaoi High-which was good-why I'm saying that in this review instead of a review on the actual story... I don't know).
Itachi. Oh Enka.
2008-12-20 . chapter 1
STOP WITH THE CRYING THING. D:

Beautiful.
-Being Deleted-
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
I hate you...you made me cry :'(
black-ammunition
2008-11-16 . chapter 1
Huhuhu... Why, oh, why did he have to die? T_T
And to think that are, or were rather, finally togther...
This is really sad...but good job on this fic too!!
Sakura Petal Wings
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
Poor Sasuke...
A Gentle Intoxication
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
Ugh, I just can't get enough of your writing! The goodness that is SasuNaru is beyond anything I can think of, and your stories supply me with it:)
AndYesThereWillBeAngst
2008-06-20 . chapter 1
Poor Sauke...NARUTO!NO!...This would have made a great multi chappie...ohh this couldve been the prologue!No!Naru chan!Nice though!
Nejislady
2008-05-11 . chapter 1
Yes. This is a very sad fanfic. You write so well that I can feel the pain, literally and the sympathy. I LOVED this one too.
silver-eyed
2008-05-08 . chapter 1
aww, naruto's dead? omg! yeah, i really like that last paragraph of naruto having a big heart and beautiful smile and shining eyes (hehee, not in those words of course) and when he leaves, it'll definitely hurt. poor guys. and yeah, i love angst though, and this is good, keep it up!
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