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| Mrs. William P. Moseley 2008-07-04 ch 21,  | abuseomg you had me crying in this chapter. that whole scene with his dad...that was so beautiful. perfectly written! |
| Mrs. William P. Moseley 2008-07-04 ch 20, | abuseno, please don't let something go wrong. that'd just be plain cruel! ugh, okay i officially am IN LOVE with this story! |
| Mrs. William P. Moseley 2008-07-04 ch 19, | abuseNO! seriously, im tearing up right now. omg poor hanson! that's horrible. i hope he's okay! |
| Mrs. William P. Moseley 2008-07-04 ch 17, | abuseoh no! now i really hate darren! i hope doug and dennis find him soon! |
| Mrs. William P. Moseley 2008-07-04 ch 13, | abuseanother great chapter from you! hanson is my FAVORITE character on 21JS and i just adore him so of course, i loved this chapter. tortured-tom moments on 21JS are amazing and this story is amazing as well! good job! |
| Mrs. William P. Moseley 2008-07-04 ch 11, | abuseoh no! stupid darren for messing with the 21JS boys! can't wait to read more! |
| Mrs. William P. Moseley 2008-07-04 ch 9, | abusegotta love tommy! poor baby getting his * kicked the first day of school. oh well, he'll pull through. can't wait to see where this is all going. personally, i think you are a fantastic writer. i am so glad i chose to read this story! |
| Mrs. William P. Moseley 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abusei am new to this fandome since seeing reruns of 21JS on tv this past month. i've written a 21JS oneshot and that's basically it so far but i hope to write more. anyways, i just started reading this and love it already! good job! |
| Dizzles the Dizzy 2008-07-03 ch 23, | abuseAh, cute filler chapter. Angie calling Tommy Baby made me laugh a bit. i thought it was just too cute. |
| Ghostwriter 2008-07-03 ch 23, | abuseAwesome job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
| knadineg 2008-07-03 ch 23, | abuseCan't wait for the sequel! |
| Pedroia the Destroya 2008-07-03 ch 23, | abuseAwesome Story! I'll be looking 4 the sequal! |
| tewksgirl 2008-07-03 ch 23, | abuseWhat a fitting end to the story...I thought it was perfect how you ended it with Tom and Angie. Those two just seem to have this amazing bond. Yeah! Sequel! I can't wait for that one to start. I'm curious to see what you will have in store for all of these guys... Congrats on a wonderful story. |
| FeedYourHead77 2008-07-03 ch 23, | abuseAw, what a cute ending. I loved it, especially the inclusion of Angie. I'm come to really like her; great OC! A sequel??! Yes yes yes! I was so very hopeful. Cannot wait for that and anything else you write! |
| Procrastinatebyreading 2008-06-18 ch 22, | abusethis was really good...which of course, i knew it would be! I still am loving Dean and Angie ..can't you make them so how go back to jumpstreet? (and then write another fic involving them??..yes!)...i mean Dean is a cop...he could work at jumpstreet!!...and Angie could provide counseling to cops (just like you mentioned in this chapter) anyways...just wanted to say that i really enjoyed this...and i hope to read more of your stuff soon!! |