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| Windaerie 2008-05-10 ch 2,  | abuseGreat story so far...I haven't read a Digi-centric story in such a long time! The character development is excellent, please continue your work! |
| The Common Wind Deity 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abuseCute story so far. :) One correction I want to bring out is your description of Koushiro. You used the word introverted, but the correct term for someone who keeps to himself or herself is intraverted. :) Really, other than that (which was minor indeed) I quite enjoy the story. ~CWD |
| Glory Nizenea 2008-05-08 ch 2, | abuseGoodness, this is really good so far! I love the friendship between Taichi and Koushiro, it's really impressive. =) The writing is elegant and flows amazingly well, and the characters are spot-on! So, needless to say, this is really, REALLY good. =D |
| !!! 2008-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood gravy, I don't come across things like this very often... Especially not in the Digimon section. You have surprised me, and that's hard to do. Then again, it seems to me that it is very hard to write the characters accurately. It's uncommon that someone can actually make the characters who they really are. People tend to bend the characters to suit their desires, but you bend those to suit the characters. It's a welcome change of pace. This is very well-written, and the nature of the characters is a good read. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. Well done. Sincerely, ~ ! |
| cuore ridente 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseaww, that was great! i really like your writing, it's very good. this sounds like it's going to be a great story, keep it up! |
| KoumiLoccness 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseKoushirou foe Life! I luv Kou/Taichi bound I hate Taishirou! Koumi out much luv yo.. |
| Blonde-Eko 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abusecute story, very funny too. just out of interest, how old are they in this fic? |