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| julietara 2008-07-26 ch 1,  | abuseaww...poor emma. I realy like it, though |
| BookmarkBookFan101 2008-07-24 ch 10, | abuseOMG OMG OMG That is such a cliffhanger . Three hairy thumbs up!! Can't wait to read next chapter! |
| BookmarkBookFan101 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abuseHeyy ShadowRose, That was a pretty good chapter! I really did like it!! It gave lots of inspiration! For when I write a story. I think Billy should be paired up with Naren. I think they would be perfect together! You know, because Billy can communicate with animals and Naren probably likes animals too. I also think the leader of the group should be named Jessica. I think that name is a flirty name but also aggresive in a way. I can't wait to read next chapter |
| Makenna 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseYAY! Stupid Fangirls! And yes, it is to nock your arrow (I do archery...:D) So yeah, good stuff, as always! And you deserve ALL the reviews you get, so add more! |
| Storms-Are-My-Nature 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abusethe dark archer, huh? intruiging name...and yes, all the archery terms are correct [i'm an archer]. is the provoking boy asa? or has he left? I like the relationship between em and danni - like sisters! how old exactly is danni? just wondering. =] Maybe -bang- for when danni and billy collided isn't quite right? maybe -thump- or something might have worked better. not critiscising or anything but it's just a suggestion! =] STORMS ps. sorry for the lack of capitalisation - i'm trying to eat a jam tart with my other hand. =] i like jam tarts. |
| BiggerThanUs2006 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter! Glad Em's okay! Can't wait until you update!! SOON! :D |
| dancingxinxthexrain 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abusefantastic, as always :] and dont worry too much about the homework thing, hahaa. story of my life, putting it off :D |
| undercoverphlover 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseI liked your chapter and i didnt think it was too long and is it Danni? |
| undercoverphlover 2008-07-22 ch 9, | abuseI really like your story cant wait to read more!^_^ |
| iXDShinez 2008-07-20 ch 9, | abuseOMFGOMFGOMFGOMFGOMFG O . O HE...KISSED EMMA ON TEH CHEEK. ;o MAKE HIM CONFES PLEASE? and make it a SUCCESSFUL one? ;3 I'll give you a chocolate chip cookie with extra chocolate chips? D: |
| iXDShinez 2008-07-20 ch 6, | abuseAw. So good @ . @ I'm getting addicted o . o;; -keeps reading- |
| XxDawnfirexX 2008-07-20 ch 9, | abuseJust another one on the way to 100! I love how Lysander is always the peanut gallery ;). But now I have no more to read! Please update soon! ~~Dawny~~ |
| XxDawnfirexX 2008-07-20 ch 8, | abuseYay! I got a dedication! This is a sweet chapter! Will keep reading! ~~Dawny~~ PS: for further reference, you can call me Dawny. ;) |
| XxDawnfirexX 2008-07-20 ch 7, | abuseWow! It's been a long time since I've checked JoM! I really, really like it so far! Must... keep... reading! ~~Dawny~~ |
| Makenna 2008-07-17 ch 9, | abuseWell, as always, LOVED IT! And thank you for the lovely dedication in Chapter...8 I believe? Anyways, I had to wait till the most recent chapter to make a review, but I really liked it! By the ways, I'm from California, in case you were still owndering about people! But still, I liked how Tancred was like 'I did it.' and Lysander flipped! lol, it was great. Really cuts story, can't wait for more! And hey, my favorite color's blue too! ;lol, I |