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| Whirlwind421 2008-07-22 ch 3,  | abuseGreat story!! |
| krysalys 2008-06-23 ch 3, | abuseWonderful fic. And your friend is my kinda person - no Rodney-whump is too much. More is always warmly welcomed! -}-@ |
| Jordan McKenzie 2008-06-01 ch 3, | abuseI loved this story! It had a terrific plot, a lot of character interaction and a heap of Rodney whump! It's also beautifully written! I especially like the Rodney/Sheppard commraderie! Bravo! Jordan |
| Beth Green 2008-05-27 ch 3, | abuseThanks for sharing another excellent story. Having lived with someone with life-threatening allergies, I can say that not only did you get it right, you managed to convey the true horror of how someone can be, for example, cooking dinner one moment and collapsed on the floor without enough breath to call for help, unable to breathe, in the next. You'd think I'd stay away from allergy fics, but when done right, as this one was, they're among my favorites. I'm so glad that John was there to offer Rodney much-needed comfort, in addition to saving his life. |
| Space1Traveler 2008-05-27 ch 3, | abuseThis was good. I like the team/family fics a lot. I have never had allergies and that was scary to read; Rodney not being able to breathe. I have a friend who has sleep apnea, bronchittis, asthma, as well as allergies. I don't know how she continues to live. I'm so glad that Rodney didn't leave the team. It showed his maturity and his team-sense that he wanted off the team, not for himself, but for the team's safety. An unselfish Rodney. Who would have thunk it? Thanks for sharing this with me. |
| Krystalrain 2008-05-23 ch 3, | abuseloved it, poor rodney. thanks for shareing |
| AccomodatorOmega 2008-05-21 ch 3, | abusei absolutely love the dialogue and structure a real page-turner in the metaphorical sense XD it was a breath of freash air in the midst of sub-par fics XD i especially love the humor and the mention of Sheppard in a dress, totally my fav part XD |
| Storm Silverhand 2008-05-20 ch 3, | abuseVery nice story - your characterations were very good, and you had a clear plot, one that wasn't too fast or slow. You highlighted the relationship of the team without being overly cheesey ( a major fault I find of a lot of SGA fanfiction), which made for a very nice read. |
| timme 2008-05-16 ch 3, anon. | abusenice fic, i'm sorry it's over. tch, should have done something with the slavers though. not like they haven't killed for less before. 'sides, what's to keep them from just starting another slave ring? it's awful, and there being no set of laws is no excuse to let them go. ~shrugs~ can't blame them either way i guess. |
| ds9bashir 2008-05-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreat story! |
| aelfwyne 2008-05-15 ch 3, | abuseI love this one. Especialy "in sickness and in health" That was priceless! |
| Random Reviewer 2008-05-14 ch 3, anon. | abuseFantastic! Wonderfully written. I can't think of any criticisms, it was perfect, only praise for you. Thank you for a great read and continue to pump out the stories, I'll be watching you for now on. :D |
| LinziDay 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuseExcellent! I love that Rodney wants to quit not because he almost *died* but because his almost-death could have hurt one of his team members. A well written, awesome fic. :) |
| JeannieWood 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abuse:) Enjoyed it. You should totally write another story. |
| The Watch Stander 2008-05-12 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! Love the team in action trying to save each other and especially McKay & Sheppard. Great job! WS :) |