That was an absolutely beautiful story! Really well written, the pace was perfect, nothing overally rushed or missed out.

All really in character as well. Love team fics! well done! :)

that was good. boy does it suck to be rodney though.

The most awesome SGA fic ever! Okay, so it's also my first but what a way to enter the fandom! I absolutely loved this; couldn't tear my eyes away, especially in the first couple chapters where you had me with my heart in my throat and on the edge of my seat. I love Rodney (who doesn't?), so this fic made my day. You did an awesome job and it shows. ^_^ I've been a fan of your anime fics for some time but I'll have to read more of your SGA stuff now. ^_^!

that was really good. I loved every part of it and today I have already read 17 Rodney whump-centric fics. It was emotional, thoughtful and really showed the characters in a unique and rare light. It was awesome!

Great story!!

Wonderful fic. And your friend is my kinda person - no Rodney-whump is too much. More is always warmly welcomed!
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I loved this story! It had a terrific plot, a lot of character interaction and a heap of Rodney whump! It's also beautifully written! I especially like the Rodney/Sheppard commraderie! Bravo! Jordan

Thanks for sharing another excellent story. Having lived with someone with life-threatening allergies, I can say that not only did you get it right, you managed to convey the true horror of how someone can be, for example, cooking dinner one moment and collapsed on the floor without enough breath to call for help, unable to breathe, in the next. You'd think I'd stay away from allergy fics, but when done right, as this one was, they're among my favorites.

I'm so glad that John was there to offer Rodney much-needed comfort, in addition to saving his life.

This was good. I like the team/family fics a lot.

I have never had allergies and that was scary to read; Rodney not being able to breathe. I have a friend who has sleep apnea, bronchittis, asthma, as well as allergies. I don't know how she continues to live.

I'm so glad that Rodney didn't leave the team. It showed his maturity and his team-sense that he wanted off the team, not for himself, but for the team's safety. An unselfish Rodney. Who would have thunk it?

Thanks for sharing this with me.

loved it, poor rodney. thanks for shareing

i absolutely love the dialogue and structure
a real page-turner in the metaphorical sense XD

it was a breath of freash air in the midst of sub-par fics

XD i especially love the humor and the mention of Sheppard in a dress, totally my fav part XD

Very nice story - your characterations were very good, and you had a clear plot, one that wasn't too fast or slow. You highlighted the relationship of the team without being overly cheesey ( a major fault I find of a lot of SGA fanfiction), which made for a very nice read.

nice fic, i'm sorry it's over. tch, should have done something with the slavers though. not like they haven't killed for less before. 'sides, what's to keep them from just starting another slave ring? it's awful, and there being no set of laws is no excuse to let them go. ~shrugs~ can't blame them either way i guess.

Great story!

I love this one. Especialy "in sickness and in health" That was priceless!