Reviews for The New Jedi Order

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bkwrm 2008-07-03 ch 12,	abuseI love this chapter. I find it interesting that Cal has feelings for Obi-Wan first. I hope that Obi-Wan gets over what happened with Anakin soon.
Ann Jinn 2008-07-03 ch 12,	abuseInteresting to watch the characters grow and develop. Now just who is the spy?
scc1fan 2008-07-02 ch 11,	abuseWonderful, wonderful update. I love how they have a bond and Cal is still trying to figure out why. She's awfully clueless. ;) Glad to see you back. Update soon! Kas
Skystrike26 2008-06-22 ch 11,	abuseGREAT STORY! I really feel Obi-Wan's pain...Cal's too!
Ann Jinn 2008-06-20 ch 11,	abuseThat was a great description of Obi Wan, a broken mug pieces in place but barely holding together. Great understanding from Calraen.
Ann Jinn 2008-06-19 ch 10,	abuseActually, they are kind of like Marines, you can always tell one. Posture and dress, they stand out in a crowd. Unfortunately too, there is so much to change, and fewer places to hide. Really enjoying this work.
JobbyShipper 2008-06-09 ch 9,	abuseGood to see another chapter now. I understand the whole time issue, so don't worry about it. I still haven't done anymore chapters of my two stories, and it saddens me. I had to get a job, and I just don't have the energy after work, and then the gym right afterwards, to to work on new chapters. In any case, the chapter was interesting. There's still no Yoda and company, which makes me sad, but there have been some developments at least. Things are getting interesting, so I'm interested to see if it really is a Jedi that's trying to rescue the slaves, or if it's really Captain Antilles or someone else entirely. Looking forward to the next chapter.
scc1fan 2008-06-07 ch 9,	abuseYAY...glad to see the update. No worries about being a while between chapters...we will come to you. :) And EVERYONE understands about tests! I was sad to figure out what was up with Calraen, though not really surprised. The way she was about Obi made me afraid it was her master though, so I'm glad on that respect that it wasn't. Hopefully you can update soona nd see how they'll succeed on their first mission together! Still lovin' it, Kas
Ann Jinn 2008-06-06 ch 9,	abuseNow to me, this is how the time between the films should have gone. I never could see Obi Wan sitting and hiding, even though he was "watching" Luke. Wonderful work you are doing. Good interactions between the characters.
Geri K 2008-06-06 ch 9,	abuseUm I am not sure if they should trust these people. Time will tell.
Ann Jinn 2008-05-27 ch 8,	abuseThe after wards for the survivors had to be horrible. Great description where she freezes and relives the situation again.
Geri K 2008-05-25 ch 8,	abuseWell at least they are talking to each other. Calraen is trying to get along with Obi-Wan. Nice update.
JobbyShipper 2008-05-24 ch 8,	abuseSo this chapter was mainly character development between the two protagonists only, I see. I would've liked to have seen what was going on with Yoda, the Organas, the twins, and company as well, but I understand that you're wanting to focus on the primary two, so I won't go into detail on that. Though if you're curious of what I'd like to see in the next chapter, it would definitely be to see what's going on with Yoda and the others. I'd like to perhaps see Yoda in search for another Jedi or two that he's found through disturbances in the Force or something. Just some thoughts there. When Calraen was thinking about the attack from the Clone Troopers, she apparently doesn't realize that all of the clones in the galaxy ended up like the ones that attacked her and her former master. Why didn't Yoda and Obi-Wan explain to her the story of what happened? Surely one of them would've told her, or are you simply waiting for a later time for her to find this out since it didn't get discussed in previous chapters?
Geri K 2008-05-18 ch 7,	abuseYes hurt and comfort always work for me, Obi-Wan needs a lot of comfort after Anakin. Naturally, Obi-Wan cannot die otherwise there would be no story. Calrean has to take over and although he was joking with her he could tell she is Master material. I don't think it is the Empire because Obi-Wan is hurt too seriously and would die in their hands. Whoever shot them down, will have a story to tell, and hopefully will become their friends.
scc1fan 2008-05-16 ch 7,	abuseYAY! Obi-Whumping rocks. :P You are doing really well with giving us the different viewpoints. I can't tell you're trying not to stick to one all the time--don't worry so much about it. It'll become a lot more natural, and you'll get used to it. As for what I want to happen next...up to you--Obi-Whumping is always a hit with me, but I am intensely curious as to what happened to Calraen, but I wager you have a timeline to when you want us to find that out, so I'll be patient. Healthy doses of hurt/comfort in between always gives me more patience though. :) Awesome job! Still lovin' it! Kas

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