Ooh... I wonder what will happen now

This is really good so far, I hope you continue it when you next have time.

Wow, this is intense! and hey, thanks for the realistic characters, so far I can feel more true emotions out of them than in many other fics. Its nice to see a more realistic Sora too, he's done so two dimensionally sometimes! So I'm liking the way this starts out, and it feels like an interesting twist to the original KH, maybe we can see characters in a different light than we're used too. It seems as though Riku is good this time, but anything can go for org-and poor roxas! ;eft there by himeself, and surrounded by such death! gah, I really do hope you continue. I know you havent updated for a couple years, and while you should never feel obligated to write fanfiction, I'd absolutely love to read more ;D

This is a fantastic start and i will be eagerly awaiting further chapters D

Another story I lovve

I like how Roxas and Sora were thinking and writing fantasy worlds and their on characters and romances and all that...

... And then find out that they actually live in a fantasy filled with bad guys and evil and romances! :D XD

I seriously can't wait to read what happens

From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart

i really enjoyed this chapter its very well written, please write more :)

Please continue!

Sounds really interesting so far... can't wait to see more of it! _

omfg update soon! its fantastic :3

i can't wait for the update, now i gotta go clean. JOY! -_- stupid friend is coming over. arg.

Very nice start - please continue, the idea of Sora and Riku from two different worlds and meeting is very interesting so far 3

Oh my gosh, I'm SO excited for more of this. It's a really cool role reversal, and you've started it so well... heh, it's funny that in the end Roxas and Axel (or Lae, in this case) will be nobodies anyways. I can't wait for more!

This is good. Very good. I'm hoping that at some point in time this is continued, although I know all too well how real life can get in the way. However, I'll be hanging out watching just in case. ;)

WOW. This is so cool! Please continue it!

I'm really liking where this one is heading and I really wish you guys weren't on hiatus currently. Ah well, so is life. Anyways, update if you can or however the circumstance may be, please. :D

"BAM", indeed. XD

This fic is totally drenched in epic. (That was definitely crappy usage... D: ) Like, I'm practically falling off my seat, damn it, I wanna know what happens next.

This is clearly gonna be a lot faster pace than "Reverse Eclipse", and there's a different sort of appeal to this fic. It's not exactly as "Kingdom" as the other, but it's got a sort of "Alice in Wonderland" or an "Oz" feel to it. It's the normal kid that got thrown into the land of WTF. It's like... Well, "Reverse Eclipse" is more like Sora's story in Kingdom Hearts, "Stumble" strikes me more as Roxas' angle. (I'm very proud for finding that relation. Please don't kill me if I'm off like WHOA.)

But yeah, you get totally thrown in for the loop in this fic. The fic basically starts with everything going to hell, and that sets the stage very high for a fic that promises epic proportions.

I got a kick out of Sora's and Roxas' creation of their joint "Kingdom" novel. It really would be cool if the KH novels had been written by them-just as well, I suppose. The adventures that lie ahead of them definitely guarantee good writing material. XD

Okay. Okay. What do the heartless want with Sora? It was mentioned that they seemed to be after him, but if Riku's the Keyblade master-is he?-what would they need him for? Is this a case of multiple keyblades? :0 Whose is the real deal?

And lemme tell you, that phone conversation with Roxas scared the shit out of me. It seems that "the heartless got him", so does that mean he's a Nobody now? D: Oh, dear. How is that going to end up? Ideally, I'd like for him to live happily ever after, preferably with Axel-speaking of him, will he make an appearance? I mean, Riku has...*frowns* I guess he must. The summary says there's gonna be Akuroku.

Back on subject, is the Organisation still in existence or are we dealing with just a couple of the members? 9_9 You always throw me in for these loops with how you twist character roles and casting...

So, what's gonna happen? The stage has been set for one hell of a performance, so I'll just sit back and wait to enjoy, I guess. There's a shitload of promise in this fic, and I'd like to see where you go with it!