update i want to know what happend next so that meaning bardock is king of the moon and ture owner of gold crytal. and ture father of chibi-usa. so udpdate i can't wait see usagi & brad and goku have family reiountime with eachother update sooon!

i hope to read the next chapters this is getting interesting.

Hmm I wonder who Brad could be. It is a total mystery. lol. This is really well written and an interesting concept. PLEASE update soon. :D

nice

who are those last people, brad and Oniichan? and what are they saying?

i do like the story

I'm sad that this has never been finished...

... or has it and just wasn't posted on this site? If it's the later of the two, could you please send me the link?

Anyways, i love your style of writing and i remember reading this story way back when in the year 2001 when it was still in the process of being written.

Sighs* memories...

i know its been a couple of years, since you updated, but plese continue this story. i dont think i ever read a story with such a twist. please update!

Please come back and finish writing. i like the story.

OMG! You have to update this story it's great!

WHE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! PLEASE UPDATE THIS!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Very cool story. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Please update I have been waiting for a long time to see what happens next to the gang and I've been waiting to see what serena says to meeting her son from the past so Please update soon

updare

So will Goku get to meet his parents and will they remember their past and also will they have a future together