 Trainalf 2009-02-07 . chapter 1Beautiful. |
 Follower of Light 2008-06-24 . chapter 1Rest in peace marines. This is a tribute for Jackson but it speaks for all fallen american soldiers that gave their lives so we can live in peace. Go to God Jackson. |
 J. 2008-06-23 . chapter 1 Beautiful poem, may Jackson rest in peace. |
 Kanjilearner3309 2008-06-11 . chapter 1Rest in peace, Jackson! |
 Crazyfrog41 2008-05-23 . chapter 1Very good! I have CoD4 and this poem brought me right back to that mission. Well Done. |
 Michieru Berujironu 2008-05-13 . chapter 1*sniffles* Beautiful. |