bookmarking!!

aww i like this
its cute
in a weird way that makes it really good

This was sad. And really good, in the way that it was sad. You know?

Good job =]

I can see this going further.
But it's perfect the way it is now too ;)
I can feel the emotion radiating from your story, I absolutely love it!
You defiantly have a gift in writing!

I enjoyed this. It's brief and would have been nicer as a longer chaptered fic but is good the way it is. It gets the point across.

Thanks you have gone and made a women cry.. *sniff sniff* Please make amore chapters I would love to read them.

This is a great story I really like it, although it's kinda sad at the end but that's the point isn't it ? Great job

This is really good. Some elements of the storyline I have come across in other fics but you merged them together in a clever and affective way. It works as both a one-shot or the beginning of a chaptered story. Well done.

Very interesting plot, I am hooked.

Update?

Great job. I was wondering if you'd be willing to do a sequal, and just make it a two-shot or something. I'd love to read it. But either way, I loved this.

that was really good! i can't wait to read more of your stories!

aww that amde me want to cry i actually have tears in my eyes