That was psychotic. And brilliant.

That was really, really good. I think you have a knack for angst that you should really explore, honestly, that was some really good gut-wrenching tragedy you got going there! You played the cliché in your favour, really. For instance, I liked selfish Naruto, which doesn’t seem that implausible once you put together everything he’s lost: he’s also human, if given the choice at some point he’d choose the one he loves. I liked Sasuke’s masked rage, he should be angry at himself, really, and it just seems like he’s channelling grief though the closest target. And finally, I like Konoha in flames, I know, I’m awful. But these stories bring a sense of raw birth, beginning, it’s in tragedy you see how people really are, after all. Anyway, amazing job as always, hope you keep writing! =*

Wow, this is deep. Okay, lemmi clear this up for myself. Naruto became hokage, but konohas at war or something. Sakura, the top medic, was sent on the battlefield, even though she should have been at the hospital, saving lives. Naruto was 'selfish' and sent sakura instead of hinata on the battlefield. Sakura died, and sasuke came back to konoha to make naruto feel bad and stuff. After that, sasuke kills hinata? Okay =D If I was wrong, just correct me =D

There wasn't much of 'personal grief' sort of angst, going on. In fact, it was completely professional; I throughly enjoyed it and left me with a quiet, verbal 'wow'.

Many, including me, tap into angst via personal grief. It's not the best way but I'm most relieved that not everyone dives into angst the same way. Thank you, for showing me that the FF community has some variations on writing. ;)

It was interesting. The way you partook on 'The world is finally at peace, thanks to A..' etc. Definitely creative and imaginative. I'll be keeping my eye out for you.

i like it

wow that was crazy you didn't lie when you said it was dark great work on this keep it up would not mind more of these dark fics take care