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Wandering the Arid Sea
2010-01-05 . chapter 1
good stuff...
marora
2009-12-08 . chapter 1
This is beautifully written, very deep. I love the sentence about foot prints in the ash. It speaks of staring a new. And Katara. I feel like you really portrayed her perfectly. We get so many weak, watered down versions of her. I love reading the few who show her as a warrior and a true prodigy (she did kick his ** after only two months of training).

And Sokka. People write him like, when he's really a genius. It's very aggravating, yet you've captured him perfectly.
Hinodeh
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
This is a great story. I love all the subtle characterization in it and how it provides an interesting and believable look into the beginning of Zuko's life in the temple. I can easily see this happening in the show.
Bookworm-Next-Door
2009-08-30 . chapter 1
Wow...remarkable! That was beautiful and it had the right balance of seriousness, funny-ness (if that's a word), and grief! Great job!
RedBeardJim
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
Absolutely excellent. Gorgeous imagery. Augh, running out of adjectives here. I loved it.
razzledazzle41191
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
These were great drabbles- very colorful and brief in a good way. I love Zuko's views on everyone, especially Toph. My favorite drabble is the one titled "a little humility never hurt anyone." Going on favorites for sure!
rascality
2009-06-04 . chapter 1
Oh my word. This is lovely. I love your insights into all of the characters, into the world and the way it works - and you phrase them so beautifully! This was an absolute pleasure to read.
CaelumBlue
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
This is really sweet. I love stories set during the time they all spent at the Western Air Temple, and this is one of the best I've ever read. Nice job!
Rockenrolla Cohlawars
2008-12-17 . chapter 1
This is amazing. It saddens me how few people remember that Aang's culture is gone, over, different from all others and one kid away from extinction. This brought it all back beautifully, albeit painfully.
spacespork
2008-12-01 . chapter 1
Wow! I really loved this. I haven't read much Avatar fic, but this was a lovely way to start. You have a really interesting style. It's clean and simple, and gets your point across incredibly well. The only thing I didn't really get was the last line, but that's probably due to my inability to see most symbolism. Overall, I thought you did a really great job!
Cloud - cloudsymphony@gmail.co
2008-11-24 . chapter 1
What the hell, really. I think I have become addicted to your writing. Especially each of your concluding sentences.

Wonderful piece, great characterization.
Roach Patrol
2008-10-17 . chapter 1
Very pretty. I love all the little factoids and how it's strung together. It paints such a nice picture of daily life.
M. Monster
2008-09-07 . chapter 1
Amazing point of view.

Simply amazing.
Artemis Rae
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
I loved this fic. I wish I had a better way of articulating it, and I wish I could leave you a better review with some better concrit, but I loved every single section, especially the first two. The last line of the second one was one I had to go back and reread, and then it just punched me right in the gut. Beautiful work.
Ppleater
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
This was absolutely adorable
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