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| Cody Furlong 2008-08-30 ch 5,  | abuseWow!That's a heavy story,you did a really great job.So what happens now?Where did Chance and Jake go,what happend to Felina and Callie?We need to see what came after. |
| gunslinger01 2008-08-10 ch 5, | abusenice ending, but you sort of swept all the super villains under the rug with the special ops team a bit too quick for my taste |
| Bolthorn 2008-07-17 ch 5, | abuseIs this all? I just got done reading this and loved it. Hope there is more to come |
| trigger12 2008-07-15 ch 5, | abuseWow! overhoul. Loved it. You even made steele compitent! |
| trigger12 2008-06-05 ch 4, | abuseMan this is really dire! I hope at least SOMETHING happens in a good way, like the four holding each other together... as the city behind them crumbles. Trigger. PS: Hope you write more on this very soon! |
| trigger12 2008-05-20 ch 3, anon. | abuseFor somereason, I can't login, but i'll review anyway! Wow, things are getting dire. how bad isw it goi9ng to get? I hope something turns out okay. So, Feral's in some sort of Japanease village huh? Nice, I don't mean to hate but I just hope it dosent get turned into naruto. trigger. |
| trigger12 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abuseY'know I may be reviewing but I still can't write without good equipment. I love how you're doing here. But, I usually hate depressing fics, it makes me just want to jump in there and stop their bickering, and show the commander what's happening. But this is a lose lose situation, Right? Anyway, love it. Keep going, and wuld you mind if I ask a few kats could die? I know I'm evil. LOL Trigger. |
| gunslinger01 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abusenice |