WHY wasn't that part in the movie, the whole:

"She's not one of us"

why??

sob sob sob.

I liked that part, know that i think of it did he even talked?
sob, and i loved the begining, the introdution of JAsper on Jessica's Behalf.

lol

oh...what'alice?' might that be?

I like it. You having a nice writing style.

This is really good! Makes me wanna watch the trailer again! lozl Great job.

OMG this one is actually pretty good ...can you pleasez keep writing?

Ooh, I liked it.
Now I gotta go watch the trailer for the umpteenth time. XD