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| Smile for Life 2008-06-12 ch 2, | abuseElva really does NOT sound like a four year old. Maybe an eleven year old. |
| HannahLuvsEdward 2008-06-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseYAY! So exciting! You're good at writing. Write the next ch. soon. |
| the werewolf gal 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseAh! I feel so special and loved! I loved the chapter! Have fun at Prom! see you later! luvs you! |
| Zady 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseGood chapter! What venom was Bella talking about? |
| Vanessa 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease continue...i love ur story 2 much...=(...please Great idea. I think u shud let the pack find bella nd elva(4 sum reason i actually like that name) and edward find bella...and everything is explained...but please, im not a jacob lover, but dont try to make him 2 mean...im a die-hard edward fan, but there has been way 2 much drama |
| the werewolf gal 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI feel special I know what's gonna happen before the next chapter comes! Great story! I loves it! |
| P0llyB00Cullen 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseomg love it! cant wait for more! good job! |
| moonlitechild91 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE HOW THE STORY IS SET UP PEAPLE KEEP WRITING I'M A MAJOR FAN OF THE TWILIGHT SERIES AND READING THE STORIES HERE ON FANFICTIONS HELPS ME WAIT FOUR THE FOURTH BOOK TO COME OUT SO PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING! |
| Edward's Heroine 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abusehurry write MORE i want to know what happens next |
| Zady 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseThis chapter is raelly good, can't wait for the next one! |