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Smile for Life
2008-06-12
ch 2,
abuseElva really does NOT sound like a four year old. Maybe an eleven year old.
HannahLuvsEdward
2008-06-12
ch 3, anon.
abuseYAY! So exciting! You're good at writing. Write the next ch. soon.
the werewolf gal
2008-05-10
ch 2,
abuseAh! I feel so special and loved! I loved the chapter! Have fun at Prom! see you later! luvs you!
Zady
2008-05-10
ch 2,
abuseGood chapter! What venom was Bella talking about?
Vanessa
2008-05-09
ch 1, anon.
abusePlease continue...i love ur story 2 much...=(...please
Great idea. I think u shud let the pack find bella nd elva(4 sum reason i actually like that name) and edward find bella...and everything is explained...but please, im not a jacob lover, but dont try to make him 2 mean...im a die-hard edward fan, but there has been way 2 much drama
the werewolf gal
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseI feel special I know what's gonna happen before the next chapter comes! Great story! I loves it!
P0llyB00Cullen
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseomg love it!
cant wait for more!
good job!
moonlitechild91
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE HOW THE STORY IS SET UP PEAPLE KEEP WRITING I'M A MAJOR FAN OF THE TWILIGHT SERIES AND READING THE STORIES HERE ON FANFICTIONS HELPS ME WAIT FOUR THE FOURTH BOOK TO COME OUT SO PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
Edward's Heroine
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abusehurry write MORE i want to know what happens next
Zady
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseThis chapter is raelly good, can't wait for the next one!
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