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Reviews For: Fate's Deal: A New Adventure - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

Merrymow
2008-08-27
ch 1,
abuseI was wondering when you're going to update?
Worldmaker
2008-07-03
ch 1,
abuseInteresting beginning. The only thing out of place is the utterly unneeded and unwanted "godmother". But I understand some authors can't help but put their OFCs in their story. What do you call those characters, anyway... Mary somethings... second word start's with an S...
killroy777
2008-07-03
ch 1,
abuseupdates plox?
Eloisa Skywalker
2008-06-23
ch 1,
abuseHarry/Tonks
fraewyn
2008-06-20
ch 1,
abuseHmm, cant wait to find out what the surprise is!
MagZ86
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseCool, I hope you update soon.
ROBERT-19588
2008-05-29
ch 1,
abuseI likev it so far. Chapter was a bit short.

Looking fore more soon.
Artendome
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseWow this story is really good. I cant wait for it to be updated.
TheDon1023
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseinteresting. i wonder what the surprise is.
spade2977
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseHey this totally looks to be an awesome story please continue to update as soon as possible. i absolutely love the harry/tonks stories they are the best! this story looks to be vuryy interesting...FANTASTIC!
Irishfighter
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseGreat start
Gasanechi
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseNice, just wondering if there's still a boy who lived here? or chosen one?

anyway, i hope this will not be a harry/many or harry/x, what i mean is, will this be a pure harry/nymph?

I truly hope it is because i hate harry 'experimenting' his relationships with other people other than the person he loves, many other authors out there tend to do that and i'm now searching for a fic where harry is loyal and faithful to the person he loves

Harry Potter and the Quantum Leap is only one of the few where harry is loyal to somebody, please let him be loyal in here too

well, keep up the good work and update soon ^_^

bai~bai~
shankstar89
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abusegreat story please update soon
Fire Dolphin
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseupdate soon, i would love to see what advetures harry goes through and how everyone will react to harry being so powerful at such a young age. update
ShadowBasalisk
2008-05-07
ch 1,
abuseinteresting beginning with Voldie eradicated from existence on all planes, and Percy being the clueless incompetent he is.

w/o Voldie in the picture, im wondering if there will be a dark lord to fill his place and spur on a war, or if Harry will grow up to be a political force with the power and knowledge to back it up, which in turn will lead to conflicts.
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