I read the first chapter of this alternate universe fic with trepidation. However, I was captivated by the way you captured the spirit of our beloved characters even though they were not where I expected them to be. I congratulate you on an excellently plotted fiction that incorporates new environmental elements that enhance the characters rather than change them beyond recognition. Thanks for this excellent story. I look forward to exploring more of your worlds! Sincerely.

Very good chapter!
Can't wait for more. :)

Great story! Well written!
Right now I just can not wait for part 2. :D

Very good chapter, I like it alot, but the ending ,wow we have alot more to come. I hope it don't take to long.
Great Job

Yay! Sully gets to kill someone now! Huzzah! Huzzah! Okay, I'm done. It's really good, please continue it quickly. I can't wait to read more!

Nice!

The Sully/Mike stuff was beautiful; the brown eyed guy stuff was creepy.

Can't wait for the next part. You write beautifully.

Man, you sure can craft a tale!!

Does this mean that Sully gets to beat someone up soon? LOL I'm totally looking forward to that!! Great Part One, Please hurry with part Two!!

A beautiful story. I have already read it twice.

That was beautiful. The love scene was very well done.

Can't wait for more.

I love this story.

Sweet chapter.

That was truly beautiful! I have said it before, and I will say it again; I LOVE SULLY!

Sweet chapter.

Wow I love the end of this chapter! It's so sweet and it makes me happy to think about it. Great work and can't wait for the next chapter!