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| AutomatedRose 2008-05-19 ch 2, | abuseYour off to a great start to an awesome story. Keep it up. |
| Jess 2008-05-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseDamn... haha i wanted to try and figure out what the letters meant and lets say i tried so many combinations and i still didn't get it hahahaha! ^_^ Love the story! can't wait for more!! |
| Lethal-Siren 2008-05-17 ch 2, | abuseMuy Bien Chica. I think your writing has gotten better and better each time you update or post a story(which has been many :Hint Hint:). This site has been a real dissapointment lately, and still continues to be, but I think you've managed to brighten the crossover section up a little bit. I love the backgrounds for each character and the fact that you've managed to keep them true to their respective personailities. I also really enjoyed the fact that you didn't put one specific character up on a pedestal and you kind of switch the roles up a little. Normally Mamoru is a little whiny punk and Wufei is a over-egoed mess. In my opinion, I think it was great that you shone them in a new light. |
| Darkbadkitty 2008-05-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseI loved chapter 2, we finally got to meet everyone. I wonder how do they all know each other, and how heero is famous? Please let this be a Rei and Heero Fic. Please update soon! I'm totally hooked! Thank you Darkbadkitty |
| suisei no mitsukai 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseI love this story. Mystery addicts me and I especially like how you're utilizing all of the different characters without making the story feel crowded or pushed. Everything still feels very natural and believable and I'm interested to see where the investigation goes and if the kidnapped group is going to learn anything new about their situation. It makes me think of Agatha Christie's And Then There Were None. Keep up all the great work! |
| BluLadyK 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseHm...intriguing. Obviously the man who has them has a severe egotistical dementia, which is supported by the possible religious connotations to the murder of those protecting the nine...but I can sense that you are going to go deeper than that, which is really interesting. I was a little surprised at the complete 180 in Minako's character. When you were writing through her point of view, she sounded shallow and unintelligent, however later, she is able to draw the connections between all of them as famous in their own fields without apparently knowing who most of them are. I'm interested to see how the investigation proceeds and if the posing of the bodies really mean much and lead them to the perpetrator. I'm also interested in seeing if the methods of the letters left at each crime scene pan out to mean anything. When I was studying the anagram, I also looked at the methods of placing them at the scene and there are some interesting connections based on who was abducted and how their letter was left. I can't wait to read the next chapter, till then, ja ne! |
| Cris 2008-05-15 ch 2, anon. | abuseVery intriguing, keep going...I ca;t wait to see what else is in store! |
| FilmMaker 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseWell this is diffently a great start to what could most diffently be an awesome story.I can't wait to read more.I wonder what Heero's reasons for being kinnaped are?And do you have pairs in mind?Please update soon. |
| reina shirahime 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseoh my god! an update! its good to really check your email everyday and log in to ffnet...it keeps you in touch with the story...by the way, love the chapter though it kinda reminds me SAW minus the saw and uh...23? Quatre's way too young to be running for president but hey, it's your story...^_^, btw, what does Heero do? and who is the one capturing them? is it Zechs or is it Treize or is it your own character? ^_^ well, so far so good, update some more, i really like this one...and don't forget to update your other stories too, ne. i'm a sucker reading yours...mwah! |
| Rena H.M. 2008-05-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseohh.. Nice up date. I cant wait to see how this story pans out. |
| Nyneve 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseHm, I must say you have me intrigued so far. I dumped the letters into an anagram generator just for grins, and I did get something, but it doesn't make *that* much sense. Still, I love any story that starts with Setsuna and combines the universes, so this one really appeals to me. I'll definitely keep my eyes open for this one! |
| Hannah 2008-05-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseI think the answer is: Nine Faces Email me to notify me if I am right or wrong. Sincerely, ~Ha-chan |
| Perfection's Scream 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuse:) this is my angry face. ..Because I like it, and now im going to have to wait on you to update this one as well. haha |
| Boingy 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseMy brain hurts, I have no idea what the letters mean... must that just makes the story more interesting to me since I'll have to read more to figure it out. I can't wait till you update this!! What ever happened to Wufei? He gets no loving? |
| suisei no mitsukai 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I'm loving the way the story is working already. It's wonderful to have something fresh and new and the fact that this is a police investigation with the disappearances of so many different characters makes it catch your attention that much more. All of your descriptions are well written. I had a very easy time imagining how everything looked. Keep up all the great work! |