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Reviews For: Des Tiny's new toy

Ramour
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseThis story does have promise, and seems interesting.
That said, maybe you should work on your grammar a little bit. But keep it up and we'll see where this goes.
LilyHellsing
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseThis is def. new and different. I love the idea. Work on your capalization
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