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| Ramour 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseThis story does have promise, and seems interesting. That said, maybe you should work on your grammar a little bit. But keep it up and we'll see where this goes. |
| LilyHellsing 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is def. new and different. I love the idea. Work on your capalization |