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Reviews For: Silver Blossoms Blown

Nieriel Raina
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful! Well done!
Eriala
2008-05-10
ch 1,
abuseThis was beautiful, and so tragic – “innocence lost as a new vision rises, a vision of darkness no star can illuminate” – you captured the whole thing excellently. Very nice.
Alquawende
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseI really enjoyed this story. The way Varda is portrayed here is perfect. It's nice that Finwe was the one to give Varda the name of Elentari. Thanks for writing!
Moonprincess202
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseThis was beautiful.
jules14
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseExcellent one-shot. You captured Varda's motherly reactions to the elves perfectly: at first, delight and wonder, as with a newborn baby, and later, sadness as she realizes the babies aren't babies any more. I never thought of it that way before, but it really makes sense.
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