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| Nieriel Raina 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful! Well done! |
| Eriala 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful, and so tragic – “innocence lost as a new vision rises, a vision of darkness no star can illuminate” – you captured the whole thing excellently. Very nice. |
| Alquawende 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed this story. The way Varda is portrayed here is perfect. It's nice that Finwe was the one to give Varda the name of Elentari. Thanks for writing! |
| Moonprincess202 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful. |
| jules14 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseExcellent one-shot. You captured Varda's motherly reactions to the elves perfectly: at first, delight and wonder, as with a newborn baby, and later, sadness as she realizes the babies aren't babies any more. I never thought of it that way before, but it really makes sense. |