hm, interesting.

...that's really all i can say, but that's just my opinion ^^'

a very nice first chapter, and a really original idea.

Wish i could do oneshots, but i'm a lot better at telling a story. you write well too.

i give this chapter alone an 8.9/10, maybe even a 9.4

i like this! banjo wants a rock band! i'd listen to it all the time.

Looks promising, do continue; Banjo will appear in the Rolling Stone soon, it appears.

Not bad. I like the idea of Banjo's nutty nature giving him the idea to rock!